xXQueenOfDarknessXx
Killjoy
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 1 | August 6th, 2008 at 02:41pm
She sits there staring at the shiny, silver razor looking back at her, sitting on her nightstand. She pulls the razor from the table and placed its cool, sharp edges on her arm. The razor digs across her skin, as the blood sheds its tears, like secrets spilling from her lips. Tears pour from her eyes, as she applies her bracelets to hide the scars from the rest of the world. As she puts them on, one thought passes through her head ' is this what my life is worth?' |
goodbye blue sky
Always Born a Crime
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 6461 | August 7th, 2008 at 02:18am Hello, welcome to the Poetry section, and the the whole board also =]
Just make sure that you have read the rules, which are saying that you have to post all of your poems in this very same thread.
Keep writing, I like the way you describe every detail in this poem, and how you use metaphors (:
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