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Knife Called Lusts Poem Thread!!!

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DROP DEAD!
Bleeding on the Floor
DROP DEAD!
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June 18th, 2008 at 07:45pm
These are the poems Ive Posted so Far hope you like them !!!



One!!!! - To be ......

Break the silence to be heard
Fall apart to be picked up
Hide to be forgotten
Put on a smile to be found by sorrow once again
Bottle up your emotions to release them all
Fall upon the streets you walk hoping the ones you love will help you up
Stuck in this web you've woven all alone
Its time to let go of all of this and awake from this nightmare
You've wept so many tears


Two!!!! - Tears

These tears hit the floor
leaving sorrow we once felt
Then the sadness fades

Three!!! - Red

Red is the heart
that is beating in your chest
Red is the love
you feel for the ones you care for
Red is the rose
that lay upon a coffin door
Red is the pain
You feel when you are hurt
Red

Four!!! - Forever a lie from the liar

This fragile heart barely still beating
Is held in your rough bloody hands
Torn and faded from the lust now lost
Filled with regret and grief
The pains to real to forgive and forget
Use what strength is left to mend it
I though you meant forever and always
How stupid i was for not seeing
The lie in those obscure eyes
Till my mourning seizes
My emotions for you will forever be

Five!!! - Fake

Shut your mouth
you might choke on your words
But you're not afraid of who you hurt
Just afraid of the truth
Tell me what your gonna do
When all the lies you've told
Seep through the very grounds you walk on
And your left all alone to sulk in your sorrow
Left for dead by the ones you cared for the most
Regretting all you've done
Wanting to go back and fix this
But who will fix your back stabbing heart
Its people like you that make me sick
People that live each day of their life
As A FAKE

Sixx!!!!!! - Fall down on the floor

Are you aware of where your headed?
Straight Down
Fall without a hope that someone will catch you
Nothing between you and the ground
Falling down because of the lie your living
Hoping to be broken beyond repair
Wishing to be anyone but you
Heart pounding in your hateful chest
Tears of black run down your cheeks
Forever lost in the misery you've created
Your hate kills me on the inside
As you hit the floor you close your eyes
When you open them all will be lost
I Wont watch you waste away

Seven !!!!! - Silence falls

Take away the sound
The world falls silent now
I will not fall apart
Even though you still have a piece of my heart
Stitch it back together
The pieces on the floor
Holding back my tears
As i see you walk through the door
My heart is bruised

Try to forgive
I will not forget
Hide myself from you
Avoiding the full truth
That I still love you
A hole in my chest
where my heart used to beat
If you'd open those eyes
You see this perfectly
Easy Mac
In The Murder Scene
Easy Mac
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June 18th, 2008 at 07:50pm
I liked it (:
pretty good
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Frank Anthony Iero.
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June 18th, 2008 at 07:53pm
Its not bad at all.
I agree, it is pretty good. =]
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Colorado Sunrise.
Salute You in Your Grave
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June 18th, 2008 at 07:56pm
Frank Anthony Iero.:
Its not bad at all.
I agree, it is pretty good. =]
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Skippy.
Always Born a Crime
Skippy.
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June 18th, 2008 at 09:33pm
i like one. Smile
DROP DEAD!
Bleeding on the Floor
DROP DEAD!
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June 18th, 2008 at 09:58pm
Shameless.:
i like one. Smile
thnx!!
To The End;
Salute You in Your Grave
To The End;
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June 21st, 2008 at 09:49pm
dude, i love the poems!!!
=]
my favorites are one and three
Easy Mac
In The Murder Scene
Easy Mac
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June 21st, 2008 at 09:51pm
I really like them all (:
you're really good at writing these :]
Stupidsadistic;
Bleeding on the Floor
Stupidsadistic;
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June 22nd, 2008 at 12:14am
I Liked Them All Alot. There My Kind Of Poetry =X
DROP DEAD!
Bleeding on the Floor
DROP DEAD!
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June 22nd, 2008 at 12:25am
thnx sooo much u guys
writerGrrl
Salute You in Your Grave
writerGrrl
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June 22nd, 2008 at 01:41am
I liked the 3rd one the best.
listen to your heart
In The Murder Scene
listen to your heart
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June 22nd, 2008 at 05:08am
okay,dude.i know nothing about this poet thing but i think this is good.especially the 3rd one

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DROP DEAD!
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June 22nd, 2008 at 05:10am
thanx
Marilyn Monroe
Awake and Unafraid
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June 22nd, 2008 at 05:28am
Awesome poem skills... They're good!!!! Smile
DROP DEAD!
Bleeding on the Floor
DROP DEAD!
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June 22nd, 2008 at 06:08pm
thank u guys it means sooo much truely
DROP DEAD!
Bleeding on the Floor
DROP DEAD!
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June 24th, 2008 at 05:26pm
hey ive added some more poems hope you like em
Evil Flying Panda :P
Killjoy
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July 27th, 2008 at 03:21am
Great poems! I didn't even know you wrote poetry!
nevergetmealive
Joining The Black Parade
nevergetmealive
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July 27th, 2008 at 04:52am
great stuff, im no poem expert but they look pretty damn good!
i especially like 3
DROP DEAD!
Bleeding on the Floor
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August 9th, 2008 at 03:57am
Thanks =]