Silent but blinding

First attempt: City lights
[comments appreciated(:]

City lights beaming a hole through my sockets, where the innosence of my eyes once were.

Heavy drum beats break down the barriers in my ears where the lies you fed me were once sure.

Beaten down by my own solid wall, the one I thought who'd always be; Now because of it, I lie there broken-it fell right on top of me.

Like lightbulbs against asfault, the color shatters and we don't know what's to blame. Like light upon dark paper, unheard of things are said, and no longer are we ashamed...

Contradicting feelings, feelings unexplained are no longer hidden, no longer ashamed of, but instead embraced.

And now so begins the process of rebuilding that wall, the same structure to which brought my fall.

Simply desperate to get out of here; out of this place, simply responding to the call..

I absolutely love the "City lights beaming a hole through my sockets, where the innosence of my eyes once were." Awesome poem, great job!

^___^ thanks a bunch(:

posting more when i get my notebook back

I basically wrote this because I was angry at people not noticeing or caring per say about teenage suicide. everyone seems to joke about it nowadays,,and it pisses me off. I don't promote suicide or anything..i just let my mind wander.
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Faceless portraits shatter against cold concrete, the poeple within them remain unchanged. All around they're falling; far distant, contracted of fear, but yet they go unnamed.

For those who caused them, they show no remourse, they don't know they're to blame. Although the hint is clear,,you can obviously hear, these people made them ashamed. And now it's too late, there's no going back, no second second chance to gain.

Some ask why this happens, other's aren't aware. Some make fun, others weep, most just stop and stare.And although this may not be as one intended, to go with such alarming pace,

At least their picture can live on fully, no longer confined by the frame.




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newnew.

this one i basically just pulled out of my head. Sorreh if it kinda blows; didn't go under revision or anything(:
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Put your headphones in,,there's trouble in the mansion again. Close your eyes and try not to picture imported wine break against the marble wall. Behind those eyelids are the scars of a million shattered glasses, the shadow of two decades lost in words left too long unsaid.

So tune it out, tune it out; turn up the volume so it's maybe just too loud. Let the sharp sting in your hear be dulled by the blow of the comforting harmonies. Because to keep hearing the sound of the golden gates smash close one more time may just be too much to bear.

Choose that same song, that one you always fall asleep to at night,,and let it soften and distract your throughts of your mutiliated path forwards. Turn up the sound till it can't go any higher, and fall asleep for just one more night, just one more night,,wishing you wouldn't wake up.

You're really good. Those were pretty awesome.