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Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 5th, 2008 at 10:03pm |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 5th, 2008 at 10:06pm Seperated (a pain in my heart)
The car drives into the distance
In his eyes I see his silent cries
My heart has been split in two
With him... half lies
The other beats sadly in my chest
Im too choked up to cry
We have been seperated...
My father and I |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 5th, 2008 at 10:08pm Friend To The End
Today and in the future
One labeled friend to the end
Faces new challenges
A friend to the end
Talks you out of opening the deep door of depression
And if they can't
They help you through to the other end
And smile as you come out
A friend to the end
Keeps you safe while ur stoned, baked, or toasted
Then throws away ur stash in the sock drawer
No matter how mad she knows you'll be
A friend to the end
takes the gun from your head
and your toes from the edge
When you've just had enough
Then gets you help
A FRIEND TO THE END IS ALEX |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 5th, 2008 at 10:09pm Deadman's Circus
In the deadman's circus
There are scary deadly things
Demons, Ghouls, and corpses
of tigers jumping through rings
The ringmasters face
is a sight to see
skin rotting off
no sign of glee
The elephant skeleton
comes rumbling in
attacks the croud
with an awful grin
The black cotton candy
drops you dead in one bite
millions of bodies
from this awful plight
The deadman's circus
is not the place to be
I wouldnt be here
if it was up to me! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 5th, 2008 at 10:11pm okay so far my thread has survived my retardedness! i post more when I find my poetry notebook!
Enjoy,
Beast
OOOOOO! i didnt know I could edit a post!!!!! muhahaha this has givin me mystical powers! |
Teach Me To Drown Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 102 Gender: - Posts: 484 | September 5th, 2008 at 11:08pm woot
casey figured out how to make a poem thread!!
lol |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 6th, 2008 at 08:33am shut up asshole |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 6th, 2008 at 03:58pm House Of lies
Ghouls demons, and ghosts give us a fright
in this haunted house tonight
For every corner might bring death
Fear shall bubble to the last breath
Innocent souls trapped in this house
Fear keeps them quiet as a mouse
Demons hear their whimpering cries
in this haunted house of lies! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 6th, 2008 at 04:08pm This is m cheeziest poetry attempt ever.... sorry
I Am...
I am a clown
I make small childeren run
A a stampede of fear and confusion
I am a drug
Hanging around
and detriorating your health
I am a knife
Plunging in and out
of your flesh
til your dead in a bloody pool |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | September 6th, 2008 at 04:31pm These poems are awsome!!! more more more more!!!! LOL xD |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 6th, 2008 at 05:45pm Addicted2GerardWay:These poems are awsome!!! more more more more!!!! LOL xD Thanks so much Addicted. ill be sure to post more for you! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 6th, 2008 at 05:47pm Lone Cowboy
(To Lane Frost)
Lone cowboy on the hill
In the sunset glow
You've worked all day
Until the sun got low
Your a good man
You've stayed sincere
You've paind your debts
but now my dear, It's time to rest
Hang your hat
Fall off your bull
Layed to rest
By heavens lull |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 6th, 2008 at 07:34pm Red Roses
I feel your breath on my skin
As we dance as one
But I know what u feel deep inside
the game has just begun
The evening grows near
But the dance... it still goes on
I look upat your face now
And the smiles suddenly gone
Instead its replaced by
Eyes glowing red
I look into those eyes of your's
You surely must be dead
Instantly
My body cannot move
Darkness surrounds me
Its embrace silky smooth
Next to me you you place the rose
From our liquid dance
Then dear vampire...
U left without a glance |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 7th, 2008 at 12:42pm I He Died In a Car Accident
If Gerard died in a car accident
Chaos would be brought
He would surely haunt us all
Run! You might get caught!
If Gerard died in a car accident
It would surely bring despair
I would lock my doors at night
Just in case he dared
(this needs help... any pointers would help. message me) |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 16th, 2008 at 08:42pm Will update sooooon! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 19th, 2008 at 11:13pm |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | September 20th, 2008 at 12:06am Seperated (a pain in my heart) - It was pretty good. Though, it seems it could use a little bit more info kind of. to fill it out. You know? X]
Friend To The End - Its kind of sweet. Though "ur" and any shortcuts like that are frowned upon on INO. I'm sorry. =[
Deadman's Circus - I love this one. Very creative and dark. ;]
House Of lies - Its pretty good. Short, but sweet. =]
I Am... - It seems pretty good, though, it seems it needs more. Though, that's just me. X]
Lone Cowboy + (To Lane Frost) - Its really good. I like this one. =]
Red Roses - I love this one. Though, I have a weakness for anything to do with vampires. X]
I He Died In a Car Accident - hmm, I don't see anything wrong with it to where it needs help. It seems good the way it is. Though, if you wanted, more could be added. But, that's clearly up to you. =]
Britt. - <3 |
Teach Me To Drown Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 102 Gender: - Posts: 484 | September 20th, 2008 at 01:24am CASE-eye
ok...ive read ALL of these already like a million times each...so i just say once more
THESE POEMS KICKASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 20th, 2008 at 09:20am thanks Britt means alot to have a post besides Teach Me TO Drown (rl friend)
altho alex ur support is good too. Check ur utube sometime x] |
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450 | September 23rd, 2008 at 08:00pm You & Me (Faythe & Marc from Rogue)
I tried to apologize on more time,
But I've hurt you one time too many.
And when I heard you slam that door,
That was it.
I felt no more.
I sulk around in a sullen heap,
Hating myself for all I've done to you.
Oh how i miss your loving embrace,
Thats Just something no one could replace.
And soon I see you've packed your bags.
But I've drawn a conclusion.
I do not tell you not to go,
Because I've broke your heart.
That I know. |