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Prize Fighter Inferno & More

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CemeteryBelowTheSea
Fabulous Killjoy
CemeteryBelowTheSea
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September 19th, 2008 at 10:30am
This world's not worth living,
I hope you understand
I kept my palms out reaching,
But came out empty-hand

I've got nothing more,
You've shown little then less
You've made up your mind, girl,
So I'll put you to Rest!

These worlds has just learned,
Of the dreams of his mind,
The surface will burn,
'Till the endless Divine

He gave us the chance,
God gave us our goal,
We've failed in that spectrum,
Now give up the ghost!

We've got nothing more,
He'll give little less,
You've made up your mind, Boy
You've laid us to Rest!

We've crossed him at last,
There's no where to go - oh,
We're not gonna last,
It's The Prize Fighter Inferno

We don't have a chance,
But I don't wanna know,
No men to march,
Hell - No men to know!
Can you give us new life?
Can you give us a goal?
Oh, The Writing Writer,
Don't Let us Go.

We don't deserve the chance,
We can't follow your goal,
None left to march,
None left to know,
Oh, Writing Writer,
This story's now ending,
It's time to go.
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
The Creature
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September 19th, 2008 at 02:33pm
It's awesome.
And I love the fact that it's title is Claude's project and it's a 'Heed poem. BONUS POINTS.
Keep up the work. :]]
Tallulah
Admin
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September 19th, 2008 at 05:57pm
You should be posting all your poems in this thread now.
please read the rules.
Thanks.
CemeteryBelowTheSea
Fabulous Killjoy
CemeteryBelowTheSea
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September 20th, 2008 at 03:51pm
Title: Dear Newo

[Introduction]
You played a risky game, Girl,
But you still gave it a run
Yet if you touch him again, Girl
n'I'll Cutt off your hands
You played a foolish game, Girl
But make no mistake -
Touch me, again, Whore,
And I'll end your Life Rate....

[The 'Real' Thing'
You walk, see me and with a wave of your hand
Confuse me, abuse me - Yep, I'm on the hook again,
Why cant you ever let me go?
I'm screaming "I'm dying", but you already know
Don't leave me under, pull me up to breahe
Am I really the abuse you need .... To use?

Some things were never meant to be
That includes, the concept of you and me,
With a Ten Speed, I'll make this story end,
But Dear Newo, It'll only happen when your...
Dead

I dont want this I cant see this
Dont you touch me ill resist this
Dont you love me Dont you feel this
You resent me Ill have vengence!
I dont want this You resist this
Whore - dont touch me Keep your secrets
I dont love you I dont need this
You'll forsake me GET OUT DEMON!

But before I let you go...
I'll have to let you know,
Always have I loved you,
Dear Newo!
But did you ever really love me?

We both see that your fading,
But you still, yet, dont hate me,
I don't think I'll take this,
Anymore.

We both see that your faking,
But your still lying
To me
So I wont be there when your shaking
You life will end, in vain
Why'd you have to cheat
On me?

Dear Newo!

This time, girl - You've gone on way to far,
Will you be reconized through the scars?
Lovely Girl, pray to god, Won't wake
'Cause escapeing this is far too late.

S'all to late, girl, it's all to late, girl, your far too late, girl,
No escape.
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
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September 20th, 2008 at 05:44pm
I've got to give you props, the way your poetry is written is pretty kickass.
Nice work. Smiley
CemeteryBelowTheSea
Fabulous Killjoy
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September 22nd, 2008 at 09:54am
Casual Disguise (Of Body and Mind)
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You cut me off to further your gain,
Your pleads and excuses aren't keeping me sane
Yet through it all, I fought with the hate,
But fuck this shit, Can't kill off this pain!

I gave you my heart, you threw me your lies,
I gave you the truth, but you stayed in disguise
I gave it my best, yet you swore it a lie,
So what can I do except hope you to die?

You called me your love, but threw me away,
You swore that you cared, but your love never came,
You called me a fake, but is it the truth?
You said "I liked you, but the like never grew"

So what can I say, babe, oh what can I do?
If I dont act now, I'm gonna lose you.
So what do you see, babe, oh what will you do?
...What will you do... ... ... when I come after you?

Hammer in hand, with a hole in my heart,
Oh darling Dearest, I'll make your soul depart
I'm coming home, babe, after all these years,
But there's no running away - Just leave it all to fear

Don't cry no more, girl, it's all in your head,
But if you wake up now, you'll sleep forever dead,
You could have been it all, and have been all I wanted
But I'll leave your body, dear - I wont be haunted.
The Original Bob.
Demolition Lover
The Original Bob.
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September 23rd, 2008 at 05:29pm
I gave you my heart, you threw me your lies,
I gave you the truth, but you stayed in disguise
I gave it my best, yet you swore it a lie,
So what can I do except hope you to die?


That's the best stanza ever. I love it.
CemeteryBelowTheSea
Fabulous Killjoy
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October 2nd, 2008 at 09:54am
[Based on Good Apollo: I'm Burning Star IV : Volume II; No World For Tomorrow]

On the Brink of Your End Complete

Oh, dear Newo, Your voice is too faint,
Your words - I can't hear, and your screams I can't take
Oh, dear Newo, My dear I must kill you off,
Your charector I love, but my heart must move on.

Your lies and treachery can't tear down these walls,
The gods are always watching, But don't care enough at all
The lies need, now, an ending, as they did at the start,
But when you scream to me, "I'm Dying!", I wont... Go.

You tore up my life girl, ripped it to shreds,
You played your part well, dear, but you'll still end up dead,
These feelings I'm feeling aren't sinister all all,
But whore - Don't you touch me, I'd much rather fall!

Here it is - The ending, or yet the end at it's start,
So just keep to yourself, save your foolish remarks,

Bow down to God, Newo - Bow down to me,
As the Writing Writer, I'll destroy you, in me.

Bow down to Death, Newo, Don't pray to me,
This is no Beginning, It's Your End Complete.