Crime.Of.Mercy.'s poetry

I know I'm not great at this but anyway...
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Daymare Town

I've been in here for years
Peeping through this barred window
Drowning in my own tears
Waiting for an end to this sorrow

Bring me a meadow flower
And hand me that rusted life
Maybe we can die together
And just forget about our life

This forbidden place leaves me nothing
Only the loss that still haunts me each night
And the revenge that's still lurking
Leaves me with this terrifying sight

I wish I can have the smile you have on your face
Also a person who cares for my needs
I wish I could escape this abandoned place
If only I wasn't overwhelmed by my greed

I'll try to sleep
As to not think of what I'm in
I'll try not to weep
After I dream again of my sins

I need to get out of here
Before the Sun sinks deeper into the ground
I can't stand waking up with this fear
Of being the only one being left alone in Daymare Town

Long Awaiting

I can't believe
How much pain you're putting me through
You had to leave
But didn't mention where you were heading to

You kept me waiting
For all these years
And all for nothing
After I cried in my own fears

You should have told me
Instead you didn't even say a word
For so long I've waited to see
You and our friendship that was shattered

I felt lonely as shit
When you said you weren't coming back
And I tried to fix it
As I realized that joy was what we've lacked

But you're too far
Leaving me to find a new friend
And it leaves a scar
Everytime I pray for you to come home again

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Let It Go.
I've kept my dreams for too long
Trying to tell it all with one song
But I just cannot do it
All of the words just don't fit
People inspire me everyday
Making me lost for words to say
I've always wanted to be in their shoe
But I can't,I'm not like you
I don't have a talent
I was only always controlled by my parents
These attemps are waste of paper
As I try one after another
But now all I can do is let go
And as I watch,I say "There goes my hero."

Nobody Knew
She sits there,smiling.
Hiding the misery she's facing
"I'm okay",
she says as her lies increase each day
With no one around,she picks up a razor
Sometimes even lucky to find a dagger
Slowly running it across her veins
Washing the blood away when it rains
She keeps her tears aside
She thought she looked ugly when she cried.
But it's gone too far
And she can't handle making another scar
Took a gun,put it on her forehead
Wondering what people might think when they find her dead.