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- Nadiya
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About
Autumn Leaves.
The cool wind
blows us forward,
like autumn leaves
we stumble
through this life.
And like autumn leaves
we're cracked and brown
withering at the edges.
we fall.
But find each other on the ground
to lie
together in the dirt.
The sky is cold.
The earth is cold.
Snow falls
and covers us from sight.
And beneath its icy blanket
like autumn leaves that lie
we slowly rot away.
Until there's nothing left of us.
The cool wind
blows us forward,
like autumn leaves
we stumble
through this life.
And like autumn leaves
we're cracked and brown
withering at the edges.
we fall.
But find each other on the ground
to lie
together in the dirt.
The sky is cold.
The earth is cold.
Snow falls
and covers us from sight.
And beneath its icy blanket
like autumn leaves that lie
we slowly rot away.
Until there's nothing left of us.
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Hi.
I'm glad you don't feel hurt by what I said. I was really worried about that, because I wasn't sure whether I would sound too harsh or too repetitive or too whatever. I just tried to give my opinion as straight as possible so that you could see my perspective, but no matter how I worded it, it seemed harsh, and I'm sorry for that.
I'm bored, summer is hot. I'm working more hours this summer, so hopefully that should rake in some cash.
Hope you're doing well, wifey.
::bye:
catlady, June 23rd, 2008 at 07:43:50am
i'm fine. =]
just sad cause school starts in a week.
mysterious stranger, June 6th, 2008 at 11:56:56am
Death Note!!!!!
L's Strawberry., June 6th, 2008 at 04:23:19am
aly! *hugs*
hello. ^_^
it's been ages.
:P
how ish you?
mysterious stranger, May 30th, 2008 at 07:52:32am
Hey girlie. Don't fret, okay? Everything will be okay. Not your fault, not his fault, not anyone's fault. It's simply what happened. And although it may not be simple, it's not the end of the world. You've been through worse.
Heh, I'm probably spamming your profile for nothing. You're probably already over him.
<33333
Hope to hear from you soon!
catlady, May 29th, 2008 at 10:38:03pm
DEATH NOTE FTW!!!
Ryro., May 17th, 2008 at 12:49:15am
nope. i photoshopped it.
:D
but i saw them live.
mysterious stranger, April 11th, 2008 at 03:53:31am
Nice. I have a friend who lives in Australia. I like this country.
Hellia, March 29th, 2008 at 05:03:45pm
hello, how are you?
I love that picture of Regina, dumb question, but do you like her music?
all the best
xxGee
goodbye blue sky, March 28th, 2008 at 01:32:46pm
Hi
Spring Break
I'm bored
I miss you
I sent you a PM a couple of days ago
Did I send it to the wrong person by accident?!? That would NOT be good. Embarassing, actually.
I'll stop being a hypocrite. I can't count the number of times I've been late replying to you.
Is everything okay?
Hope school isn't too stressful.
Love love, wifey
catlady, March 27th, 2008 at 06:16:58pm
aly!
how ish you?
:D
mysterious stranger, March 26th, 2008 at 07:58:29am
thank you :hug:
I'm not okay with it yet, but time heals.
a turtle huh?
yeah I think I saw you confessing about it xD
Brian Haner, March 18th, 2008 at 09:48:46pm
well, my cat died on Monday :(
but other than that, good.
you?
Brian Haner, March 13th, 2008 at 10:05:13am
YOU'RE SO AWESOME YOU TIED FOR FIRST ON YOUR FIRST TRY!!!!!
As soon as I read your poem, I had a feeling it would be yours, just the style and the way it's written, it's what I like most about your poems.
I especially liked your poem out of all the ones entered in the contest because I was able to picture a starry sky and know a bit about what you were saying. With the other ones, I either couldn't picture it or there were too many words crowded together, although they were all still good.
Wow, the poeple on this website are so talented, it's amazing how many beautiful things can be produced...
YOU TIED FOR FIRST PLACE, LOVELY!!!
love love to you too.
catlady, February 26th, 2008 at 02:01:02am
i'm fine. =]
yeah, i miss talking to you. :tehe:
ummm. can i ask who's nadiya?
:D
mysterious stranger, February 19th, 2008 at 01:53:53am