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12/06/2007 - Auckland, New Zealand - Vector Arena

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harrystyles
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harrystyles
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:29am
well that helps alot!
thank you =)
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:30am
yae! ^_^
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:31am
can you tell me what you think of this?


There were many reasons that people were sceptical towards Muslim people. The main one was Xenophobia-or fear of the unknown. The Nine Eleven attacks brought this to their attention immediately after. Many people felt unsafe around strangers and places that seemed extremely busy in fear of another terrorist attack. This was exactly what a terrorist wishes to achieve, fear among a large population of people. This affected a lot of countries other than America as even here in New Zealand there was a boom of people returning to the country feeling as though that overseas is not safe anymore. Of course as the media turned its attention to other things many generally forgot of the fear and ventured out into the world. If you think about this in theory directly after the attacks would have been the safest time to travel as now we are more at risk. There has been a large period of time since the last attacks so wouldn’t that mean that we should expect something soon. For all we know something could be planned for the Olympic Games in Beijing this year. This is what makes terrorism so effective; we don’t know when it is going to come.
little birds.
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:34am
TENACIOUS D Luckily I saved the link =]


I'll read that thing now =]
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:35am
its just rambling.... lol im so bored of it
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:36am
thanks for tenacious d!
*hug*
little birds.
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:37am
You're welcome =]


I think it's good! Just: "so wouldn’t that mean that we should expect something soon. "
Question mark?
Hopeless Heart
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:37am
That pretty good so far Erin

hey when is Eliza going to be on that radio station? I really hope they ask my question lmfao
little birds.
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:38am
I think it's tomorrow morning sometime, like somewhere between 7 - 9 maybe, I'm not sure. I'm gonna try and record it...
rolling on floor I hope so to!
harrystyles
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:38am
yup its good erin.
but...i would exchange 'really' in the second line to something moreformal.
it could use a few more commas, like was a boom of people returning, feeling as though that overseas is not
and check your tenses in some places Very Happy

woah my explaining made no sense.
the underline parts are where it kinda doesnt make sense/tense is wrong
and i put a comma in that sentence.
sorry Cheese
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:38am
i dunno when the radio thing is...

(thats the 2nd middle paragraph btw)
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:39am
thanks you guys for the help
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:44am
ahhh i have to write about the war on terrorism now...
i didn't pay attention to that in class
Hopeless Heart
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:57am
What class is that for? Social Studies?
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:58am
social "science".... yeah...
Goodnight Nurse
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May 6th, 2008 at 02:59am
k i will be back at half past (shorty is on)
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Shotgun Sinner
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May 6th, 2008 at 03:53am
someone should really make a paul and emma group on bebo ... or The Black Pajama Party band
harrystyles
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May 6th, 2008 at 04:06am
id so join! lol

im getting so confused with everyones new avas >.<
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May 6th, 2008 at 04:12am
haha yea everyone keeps changing their avas and usernames
little birds.
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May 6th, 2008 at 04:20am
Evening Wear:
someone should really make a paul and emma group on bebo ... or The Black Pajama Party band
Yessss! That'd be so awesome!