a day to remember.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Posts: 426 | July 23rd, 2008 at 10:19pm
11 Minutes To Midnight (Part 2)
Where the fuck are you tonight?
(Yeah, where the fuck are you tonight?)
These city streets are dead and cold,
(This drunken stupor's getting old.)
I would like you to die,
As painfully as possible.
Oh sorry, did that slip out?
I didn't mean to be so blunt,
Anyway, I hope you heard that, yes,
You're a stupid, fucking cunt.
Please save the over-dramatics,
I've been just simply estatic,
To see the lie you call your face,
And can't you tell? I'M BEING SARCASTIC.
I've fueled the flame that you created,
The sole entity of all my hatred,
I'd steal breath out from your lungs,
To remind you who you took it from,
Bitch.
They say a broken past leads to a hopeful future,
But I wouldn't count on it.
Golden virtues don't apply to whores,
And one day, distance will answer the door.
Because one day, realization will have come,
And I'll wait that day to hear you beg and plead,
To die alone.
You'll only then realize the true meaning of,
Till death due us part.
Sleep, my angel,
Sleep.
(This is your funeral)
Tonight, I hope you hear this song as you descend into sleep,
And convulse on the spot, bitch. |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | July 24th, 2008 at 07:11pm Wow really powerful and i can't find a favorite part 'cause i loved it all! it has a strong ending and a great beginning to it. brilliant! :] |
a day to remember.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Posts: 426 | July 24th, 2008 at 11:44pm Aww, thank you! 
Basically I just spewed out everything on a poor piece of paper.
The reason for the unconventionally structured stanzas is that its more of a hardcore song, with a breakdown in the middle.
So, like, I guess you'd have to hear the actual music to understand better.
(P.S: My band's starting work on Lenore this Sunday. =D) |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | July 25th, 2008 at 12:12am you're welcome and i could sort of tell it had a hardcore basis.
and that's great, I can't wait to hear it :] |
