Bare Bones

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Dream of Falling Bleeding on the Floor Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 1615	May 1st, 2009 at 02:34am She won't listen to reason Won't listen to anything you say Slowly she fades away Her mind is missing as she flys farther away The bare bones of sanity is what she is today She's only the bare bones Nothing left to see Cause she's only the bare bones The structure that used to be He can't hide it all He tries to hide, but you can see His guard is fading away His pride is gone as everyone watches his armor slipping away Theres only the bare bones to cover up with today He's only the bare bones Everthing out on display Cause he's only the bare bones There nothing to hide the junk inside The bare bones is all that you left us with All of us bare in some way today. Just wrote this quickly after getting out of the bathtub. Not really my best, but what do you think of it? Comments? Suggestion?
a touch of anarchy. Shotgun Sinner Age: - Gender: - Posts: 7981	May 1st, 2009 at 03:25pm Thats really beautiful.
Dream of Falling Bleeding on the Floor Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 1615	May 1st, 2009 at 10:37pm Thank you. I thought of the chorus type thing in the bath and I had to finish it. I'm glad you like it.
a touch of anarchy. Shotgun Sinner Age: - Gender: - Posts: 7981	May 3rd, 2009 at 07:51am I do, its really good. Chilling.
mick_st_john Killjoy Age: - Gender: - Posts: 16	May 3rd, 2009 at 06:35pm i think it is really good!
Dream of Falling Bleeding on the Floor Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 1615	May 7th, 2009 at 09:17pm Thank you.

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