Poetry, It's simple
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MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | |
MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | Right I made this topic, so I can start it off can't I? So here is my poetry I entered in a competition for poetry and lyrics, if you wanna see the competition click here >>> http://www.youngwriters.co.uk/ Thanks, Bye now Walking through these streets looking for a face thats never there. Slowly walking down the pavement, thinking of that face. When will I find those illusive eyes that look upon me and let his smile warm my soul It's hard for me too understand This feeling inside my heart It's neither happiness or sorrow but something close to fear I think about him whilst I sleep More then whilst my eyes are open My memories are slowly fading Eventually I fear I will lose them forever This one boy who has been abandoned No one knows him, or loves him Only me standing alone Waiting till I can love him In my heart I feel his presence Although he is far away But I believe he is seaching also For this one girl whom he loves Is his heart beating like a drum? Like mine is while I search Nothing more matters He is what I need to be one Thanks xx |
white_lies_red_truth Fabulous Killjoy Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 152 | Welcome to INO you got a few awsome lines in there "It's neither happiness or sorrow but something close to fear"i love this line anyway good stuff keep writing and il keep reading <3<3 |
MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | Well thats great thanks xx |
MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | Ok, so my last piece was a hit with one person, lets go for more this time!! XD This ones more like a song, but whatever... Over. Over. In the halls of mayhem In the house of reckless I make my bets And close the doors In this room of selfishness I lay awake making my decision How can you pay the price? I can’t even imagine (chorus) In the streets of pity I live without sin But live with guilt I lost my innocence long ago I just hit the low point It’s time I stopped making mistakes And laugh again This is coming to a end But before I go He must feel the pain Too make him understand what I went through And how I lost my dignity (chorus) That’s it, were done Finished (pause) Over. |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | Amazing stuff(: More pleaseeee. |
MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | Thankyouu xx |
MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | I got another person commenting, woop woop!! Haha, Today I wasn't very well so it gave me a little bit of inspiration, hope you like it! Sickness My head is swelling with your torture This is not what I planned We were so good Now you are so bad It's not that you are too close to me It's that you aren't close enough I can't feel your heartbeat This sickness is consuming me It wraps around my body slowly and painfully Slowly seeping into my heart Its opened up a hole That you sealed tightly shut My jagged breath is a warning sign Soon I will become a souless freak Incapable of love This sickness is frightening You said to move on How? I asked You replied with hatred: "By finding the medicine" Thankyouuu loveyouuu lots & lots xx |
Whispered.Secrets. Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 4 | Hey! Umm...so this is my poem...hope you enjoy it! Did I mention I love you? Before I put this gun to my head And rid myself of a world so cold and cruel Did I mention I love you? I have often told you That you're the only reason Im still alive But right now that reason doesn't seem big enough I'm sorry, but I really have to go Don't waste your tears And blame your fears On me Because as I leave I will remember you And how you helped me get through the day And all the times you took the knife away As cold tears sting my eyes And cold metal presses to my head Your name goes through my head You don't have to forgive me But if you do Don't blame yourself Because if you weren't there I would already be dead But before I go Did I mention I love you? Thanks xoxo |
MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | Hey that's really good !!! Thankyouu for posting it on here, I hope to here more !! And more from different people, this isn't just for me to put my random poems on, have a go, every poem is good as long as it comes from the heart. Thanks xxx |
MynameisLilli Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 10 | Right then, this poem is called Imagination. it is called that because I want you to use your imagination and write the next line. And if the first and second line have been written, you write the third. And so on. So please put whatever pops into you head! Have fun with it ! Imagination I can't keep living in a world that doesn't belong, you aren't part of reality. So you just put the title Imagination and then write your line and I will look and update the poem every now and again. Thanks xx P.S For those who have enough insperation (can't spell) to do a whole poem go ahaed, just have a go at this too please ! x |
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