GorgeousNightmare! Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 2784 | April 25th, 2010 at 07:26pm
The Hardest Thing :
the hardest thing I'll ever do
is let go of you
And look forward instead of back to my past
I wonder how long this broken heart will last
I guess everything you ever said was a lie
So I'm going to move forward or at least I'm going to try
how many times can a heart crack before it shatters
or does it even matter?
I've sat and cried over you way to much
just wishing one more time I could feel your touch
But you don't care and neither should I
so I'm going to move on or at least I'm going to try.
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Do you know what it feels like to be left behind? losing everyone around you in such little time.
I try not to worry since they're left in the past but it's hard going through life knowing nothing ever lasts.
It's hard to hide behind this frown, When on the inside you're on the verge of a breakdown.
I've lost everyone that meant the world to me. All I have left of them are these memories.
You have no idea how badly I want them back. But they've left me in the past which was their plan of attack.
The pain of losing them will never go away.
I'm tired of feeling like this everyday.
I feel like I no longer belong.
I fake my happiness to show nothing's wrong.
i'll add more later. |
yoseob. Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 1294 | April 26th, 2010 at 02:50am They're really good (: |
GorgeousNightmare! Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 2784 | April 26th, 2010 at 04:20pm Thank you very much. (: that means alot. |
mindless. Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2915 | I love the repeat in The Hardest Thing; "So I'm going to move on or at least I'm going to try", I think it adds a great impact on the poem.
I also love your use of rhyme scheme. |