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Hi I´m new on here...but My Chemical Romance is a key inspiration of mine in my writing...so fans of MCR should be able to tell me )because you have such fantastic taste!) if my stuff is any good...right?

Alright...I'll start you guys off with a bang...these are song lyrics ok?

Your Lovely Asylum

(Intro/Verse 1)
Such a lovely corset oh so soft as steel
Can you make it just a bit tighter?
I can sense the urgency you might think I might feel
Put underneath a boiling lighter
And I feel marvelous
Don't you disagree?
The easiest part of this whole mess
Is that you to get to kill to be free

(Chorus)
Spit the yes sir out
And put the dresses out to dry
Up all of that blood to sprout
Another crimson lie
The skins I didn't taint
I swear to you
It's just another kind of war paint
And the ones on me are black and blue
I've taken residence
So you can have more evidence
And slit my eyelids plastic numb
Join the illustrated administration
Of your lovely asylum

(Verse 2)
Torn out of the ire
I'm being guarded by a
Precious prison fire
Why won't the pay backs get any smaller?
Take that IOU and stitch it on
My other black leather collar
I'm stretched out on this open sky of thorns
Teasing me to praise you on your scorns
Get up and ripen please
So you can finish plucking me
Out of my obituary
Kissing can be kind of scary
When my lips are wary
Of your mindless marry me

(Chorus)
Spit the yes sir out
And put the dresses out to dry
Up all of that blood to sprout
Another crimson lie
The skins I didn't taint
I swear to you
It's just another kind of war paint
And the ones on me are black and blue
I've taken residence
So you can have more evidence
And slit my eyelids plastic numb
Join the illustrated administration
Of your lovely asylum

(Verse 3)
Finish the job so you can get paid out right
Heard that the demons are out getting laid tonight
A blurry fight to the unsuspecting death
An opaque solid kiss
With my next to loving breath
Happy in the morgue where I was born
I see that my unsocial insecurity is free
This is where you mourn
When I'm at the best of my anatomy

(Chorus)
Spit the yes sir out
And put the dresses out to dry
Up all of that blood to sprout
Another crimson lie
The skins I didn't taint
I swear to you
It's just another kind of war paint
And the ones on me are black and blue
I've taken residence
So you can have more evidence
And slit my eyelids plastic numb
Join the illustrated administration
Of your lovely asylum

(Bridge)
Let's interlace our veins
And hope we don't break the flow
Iron out the iron stains
And explode in the after glow
Laying lungs down
On the after side of the under life
It's a wonder that the acid sprinklers made you drown
When you could have cut my devotion with a knife

(Chorus)
Spit the yes sir out
And put the dresses out to dry
Up all of that blood to sprout
Another crimson lie
The skins I didn't taint
I swear to you
It's just another kind of war paint
And the ones on me are black and blue
I've taken residence
So you can have more evidence
And slit my eyelids plastic numb
Join the illustrated administration
Of your lovely asylum

(Spoken/Outro)
"Waiter it appears the honey mooners have a bit of a choke"
"Do you think it was the femur in their champagne?"
"Or that they went outside for a smoke?"


So my question to you...do you think that this all happened...or was it all a figment of her imagination?

Is the asylum an actual architectural building...or her mind? To be truthful the physical building isn't really the core of the insanity...I always find that my lovely asylum is my mind...what do you think?

Ok...one more...last one for tonight and only because I can't wait for people to read my stuff

White Wine Moon

(Intro/Verse 1)
I'm sick of needing a prescription
For your latest addiction
Under that white wine moon
I'm tired of robbing, regarding
Always here to start in
Inventing a demented coiled gleam of continuity
Instigating, creating, participating
In the core of mystery
Thriving, enticing, fidgeting
Splicing fear
Estimated under wholesome tears
Close the door she's lying louder
In the coal worn shadows
I couldn't be prouder

(Chorus)
Criss cross
Its your loss
You started well
But it's over boss
Let me see if I can steal the pain sir
Scurry and restrain her
Strapped and look where she's been trapped
Hear her eyelids burn
Savior on his swift return
And he brought her bracelet back
With no wrist that he can attach
Don't fret a corpse that is not invincible
Allow me to strike the match

(Verse 2)
Such a shame
And she was so perfect to blame
For all the delusions in the illusions
You savored for my brain
That you severed open
So it could rust up in the rain
My apologies master but you weren't yours to lend to her
There was a price tag on her heart
It seemed only fair to return it to the sender

(Chorus)
Criss cross
Its your loss
You started well
But it's over boss
Let me see if I can steal the pain sir
Scurry and restrain her
Strapped and look where she's been trapped
Hear her eyelids burn
Savior on his swift return
And he brought her bracelet back
With no wrist that he can attach
Don't fret a corpse that is not invincible
Allow me to strike the match

(Verse 3)
Sexiest xray I've ever seen
Look at all that clotting straying inbetween
Lock her in the dream
Swallow down the key
That'll add some weight
R.I.P
An abreviation for your always and never too late
She's cursing between the distaste
And the prophecy of insertion
Ignore the pulse
That's her best diversion

(Chorus)
Criss cross
Its your loss
You started well
But it's over boss
Let me see if I can steal the pain sir
Scurry and restrain her
Strapped and look where she's been trapped
Hear her eyelids burn
Savior on his swift return
And he brought her bracelet back
With no wrist that he can attach
Don't fret a corpse that is not invincible
Allow me to strike the match

(Bridge)
Accidents are prone
To swiping medication
But you should get your own
I'm interested
In the afiliation to your bones
Flustered with the pain
You promised HIV
Now hold in vain
Oh so trè jolie
Makes us so contagious
Say worse or sedate
Gather round outrageous
Time to medicate!

(Chorus)
Criss cross
Its your loss
You started well
But it's over boss
Let me see if I can steal the pain sir
Scurry and restrain her
Strapped and look where she's been trapped
Hear her eyelids burn
Savior on his swift return
And he brought her bracelet back
With no wrist that he can attach
Don't fret a corpse that is not invincible
Allow me to strike the match