Don't have an account? Create one!

A Wish

AuthorMessage
ciara.
Crash Queen
ciara.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 32541
March 6th, 2009 at 07:38am
A tear escaped her periwinkle eyes
Like a falling star across the midnight skies
A thousand more threatened to fall
Yet no sound was heard from her at all

She remembered an event from a year ago
A memory she doubted would ever go
It was the day she saw her favorite band
Of five guys who always seemed to hold her hand

It was in this very place
Where she seemed to know every face
Where she felt she had everything she ever wanted
Yet the good girl she was
She didn't take them for granted

She remembered that time
When she seemed to almost mime
To a friend who understood her
Despite the loud explosions from the nearby speaker
And just the way they sang along
There was no doubt they knew every song
And how they crazily danced around
It was like they had planned to break the ground

Then came the realization
They finally saw their inspiration
And everything they shared together
Was to be remembered forever

But a year had passed
Everything turned to contrast
It was like they never knew each other
It was like they never bothered

She missed her and was afraid
Everything might become an undecipherable blur:
the memory, the camaraderie,
and the melodies they already miss
The world fell apart
They broke each other's heart
Now they couldn't find any solution
That would make their world go back into motion

As she stood beneath the stars
Trying to ignore all her scars
She wished for something that may never come true
Something she can never do

She wished for a star that would bring them back
The friendship they now undeniably lack

And as she cried silently for sorries never accepted
She convinced herself that such memory never deserved to be neglected

Then she continued to reminisce an event from a year ago
A memory she doubted would ever go
It was the day she saw her favorite band
Of five guys who always seemed to hold her hand
believing.
Salute You in Your Grave
believing.
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Posts: 2318
March 7th, 2009 at 12:31am
I love thisssss.

<3333

Awesome.
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Your Ghost.
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Posts: 440
March 7th, 2009 at 09:13am
This is so fantastic, I have a tear in my eye Very Happy LOVE IT.
Pistol_GeeBucks
Joining The Black Parade
Pistol_GeeBucks
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 200
March 7th, 2009 at 05:37pm
Oh wow. I haven't looked at the poems here for a while, and I'm glad I just decided to.

I absolutely adore the ending. How you repeat that stanza, but it has a different feeling, like she's trying to make herself feel better.
I honestly adore this poem. It speaks volumes to me
Well done Smile
ciara.
Crash Queen
ciara.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 32541
March 10th, 2009 at 08:03am
Wow, thank you for the comments :]
They made my day. I saw them just now. Tehe