Poetry, It's simple

Hey, I like to write poetry sometimes. It really helps get everything out after bad day, or even a good day. Please write and post it on here so everyone gets the privilege to see it. Thanks xx

Right I made this topic, so I can start it off can't I? So here is my poetry I entered in a competition for poetry and lyrics, if you wanna see the competition click here >>> http://www.youngwriters.co.uk/ Thanks, Bye now

Walking through these streets looking for a face thats never there.
Slowly walking down the pavement, thinking of that face.
When will I find those illusive eyes that look upon me
and let his smile warm my soul

It's hard for me too understand
This feeling inside my heart
It's neither happiness or sorrow
but something close to fear

I think about him whilst I sleep
More then whilst my eyes are open
My memories are slowly fading
Eventually I fear I will lose them forever

This one boy who has been abandoned
No one knows him, or loves him
Only me standing alone
Waiting till I can love him

In my heart I feel his presence
Although he is far away
But I believe he is seaching also
For this one girl whom he loves

Is his heart beating like a drum?
Like mine is while I search
Nothing more matters
He is what I need to be one


Thanks xx

Welcome to INO you got a few awsome lines in there
"It's neither happiness or sorrow
but something close to fear"i love this line
anyway good stuff keep writing and il keep reading
<3<3

Well thats great thanks
xx

Ok, so my last piece was a hit with one person, lets go for more this time!! XD
This ones more like a song, but whatever...

Over.

Over.

In the halls of mayhem
In the house of reckless
I make my bets
And close the doors

In this room of selfishness
I lay awake making my decision
How can you pay the price?
I can’t even imagine

(chorus)
In the streets of pity
I live without sin
But live with guilt
I lost my innocence long ago

I just hit the low point
It’s time I stopped making mistakes
And laugh again
This is coming to a end

But before I go
He must feel the pain
Too make him understand what I went through
And how I lost my dignity

(chorus)

That’s it, were done
Finished

(pause)

Over.

Thankyouu xx

I got another person commenting, woop woop!! Haha, Today I wasn't very well so it gave me a little bit of inspiration, hope you like it!

Sickness

My head is swelling with your torture
This is not what I planned
We were so good
Now you are so bad

It's not that you are too close to me
It's that you aren't close enough
I can't feel your heartbeat
This sickness is consuming me

It wraps around my body slowly and painfully
Slowly seeping into my heart
Its opened up a hole
That you sealed tightly shut

My jagged breath is a warning sign
Soon I will become a souless freak
Incapable of love
This sickness is frightening

You said to move on
How? I asked
You replied with hatred:
"By finding the medicine"

Thankyouuu loveyouuu lots & lots
xx

Hey! Umm...so this is my poem...hope you enjoy it!

Did I mention I love you?
Before I put this gun to my head
And rid myself of a world so cold and cruel
Did I mention I love you?
I have often told you
That you're the only reason Im still alive
But right now that reason doesn't seem big enough
I'm sorry, but I really have to go
Don't waste your tears
And blame your fears
On me
Because as I leave
I will remember you
And how you helped me get through the day
And all the times you took the knife away
As cold tears sting my eyes
And cold metal presses to my head
Your name goes through my head
You don't have to forgive me
But if you do
Don't blame yourself
Because if you weren't there
I would already be dead
But before I go
Did I mention I love you?

Thanks
xoxo

Hey that's really good !!! Thankyouu for posting it on here, I hope to here more !! And more from different people, this isn't just for me to put my random poems on, have a go, every poem is good as long as it comes from the heart.

Thanks xxx

Right then, this poem is called Imagination. it is called that because I want you to use your imagination and write the next line. And if the first and second line have been written, you write the third. And so on. So please put whatever pops into you head! Have fun with it !

Imagination

I can't keep living in a world that doesn't belong, you aren't part of reality.




So you just put the title Imagination and then write your line and I will look and update the poem every now and again.

Thanks xx


P.S For those who have enough insperation (can't spell) to do a whole poem go ahaed, just have a go at this too please ! x