skee_save_me_mcr
Killjoy
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 89 | July 21st, 2010 at 07:52pm
I Stole a Wish
I stole a wish from a child's shooting star.
I took it for myself to use when I needed it.
I, the criminal of dreams, now feel a weird sensation in my blackened heart.
It feels like sadness, and anger, and pain.
Could it be? My enemy? The one that no crook ever wants to feel?
REMORSE?
I must return the wish to the little boy
make up for my sin.
Repent, repent, repent.
Stealing wishes is crushing dreams. |
mindless.
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2915 | July 21st, 2010 at 09:37pm i actually really like what you've done here. if your other poems are like this one, i'll be anticipating the next instalment to this thread. =D |
littlejeka
Generation Nothing
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 126288 | July 22nd, 2010 at 04:29pm :] I like it. Especially because it's about dreams and wishes. <3 |
skee_save_me_mcr
Killjoy
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 89 | July 23rd, 2010 at 01:20pm Thanks! This is my new poem about walking around at night.
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They Call Me The Vampire
I am a child of the night.
The daylight disrupts me, leaves me disgruntled at the scene.
Wandering around, tiptoeing on gentle puddles of moonlight.
I travel in the shadows, conceiled in the veil of dark.
They call me The Vampire,
the one who hisses at the morning light
and leaps at the dark.
Midnight is my gentle calling,
luring me down to the tranquil river.
Run on shallow hopes at twilight,
and repeat the sequence at dusk.
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Kinda crappy I know :L |
K.K.
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 1787 | July 24th, 2010 at 02:24am It's not crappy, it's really nice :} |
skee_save_me_mcr
Killjoy
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 89 | July 24th, 2010 at 03:41pm aw thanks you! |
skee_save_me_mcr
Killjoy
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 89 | July 24th, 2010 at 03:52pm ANY POEM SUGGESTIONS? SUGGEST THEM TO ME NOW! |
