jmhudak17 Killjoy
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 20 | July 23rd, 2009 at 06:58pm
I play drums in my band, and I wrote a song yesterday. Tell me what you think:
I'm still alive,
But my dreams are dead.
Selling your soul,
To get in my head.
You made it black,
When my sky was blue.
The torture inside,
If only you knew.
How can I show you,
That my time is now.
I never could live,
Yeah I never knew how.
If living a lie,
Isn't what I deserve.
Then I cannot wait,
I cannot wait to let go.
I saw a jewel,
That I couldn't reach.
My heart's been drained.
And now I'm pushed to the brink.
You pushed me back,
Threw me in the mud.
And you're always there,
To wipe up the blood.
How can I show you,
That my time is now.
I never could live,
Yeah I never knew how.
If living a lie,
Isn't what I deserve.
Then I cannot wait,
I cannot wait to let go.
I cannot wait to let go. |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | July 23rd, 2009 at 08:11pm great,great,great! |
Deadly Kiss Killjoy
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 8 | July 26th, 2009 at 03:06am It's... actually pretty good. I like it! ^^
And I can even imagine the song... lol. Good luck with your band! |
I.wish.i.wer.a.ghost Motor Baby
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 940 | July 26th, 2009 at 04:00am yeha its good. easy to read sort of if you know what i meen?
i like it alot =] |
Clo Killjoy
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 8 | July 26th, 2009 at 10:04am I love that song its a bit like a cross between the two songs i dont love you and cancer. I write songs aswell and am also in a band. You have a real tallent and will go far. |
Rayessez Killjoy
Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 14 | July 28th, 2009 at 12:43pm cool |
jmhudak17 Killjoy
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 20 | November 16th, 2010 at 05:43am I've got some new lyrics. The first stanza is definitely a verse, while the second is either going to be the chorus or the second verse (I haven't decided yet). Obviously, this song isn't fully done, but I'd just like to see what you think.
The sun it will set,
But the story's the same.
This dream never ends,
Yet there's no one to blame.
I'm all that I have,
I'm all that I will,
There's still no cure,
I'm standing still.
But where can I go,
When I'm stuck in my head,
And how can I live,
If I'm feeling so dead.
Drowning in cheap rum,
I'm gasping for air.
I just wish I knew,
How to get out of here. |
jmhudak17 Killjoy
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 20 | November 17th, 2010 at 03:47am Added a third stanza:
The poison I take,
Helps me to forget.
The nights spent alone,
The years of regret.
Empty days and nights,
Waiting to be filled.
The past is a garden,
That can't be sowed. |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | December 7th, 2010 at 04:56pm please write more you are so good at writin poetry |