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I Don't Love You ( a Gerard and Eliza love story )

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In The Murder Scene
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Age: 34
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April 24th, 2007 at 04:57am
Vel, jag skrev en historia i skolan i engelsken och tenkte att jag skulle posta den her på INO. Jag såg senare att historia hadde ett My Chemical Romance preg. Cool
Det kommer flera kapitlar, jag måste bara få någon som vill lesa den och som faktisk tycker om historian. : )
Here it comes, och husk; inte racka när på mej, det är min första historia. :]

...................................................................................I Don't Love You

Chapter 1:

“One day, Gerard Arthur Way, I will love you the way I used to.”, Eliza said, turning her back against him.
The sentence made Gerard’s veins freeze. He couldn’t believe that Eliza had said that without even moving a muscle.
And after all the time she owed, she’s still the good-for-nothing he doesn’t
know.

He tried to remember the good days when they lied next to each other, just looking into each other’s eyes. Hoping, dreaming, that one day they would be together and everything would be the same as it once was.
But it was too late, too much trouble had occurred. She didn’t love him like she did yesterday and there was no turning back now.

After all the things they’d put each other through, it was time to say good bye.
Finally, the bats would be unleashed from this cave of darkness and wraith.
Everything would be fine again, they just had to take the final step and everything would be okay.

“No, Eliza. Please…”, Gerard tried to stop her. He tried to show her just how much she meant, and still means, to him.
“I’m so afraid, Gerard. I’m so afraid of what will come. Of what will happen to us…” Eliza said, holding his cold hand.
“Don’t worry. Everything will be fine, I promise.”
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MyCRomance
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April 24th, 2007 at 06:04am
jätte bra fortsätt skrivVery Happy
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In The Murder Scene
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April 24th, 2007 at 06:05am
Ooh, fancy. Very Happy
Min första lesare. *Update will soon come. Cool*
Problematique
Bleeding on the Floor
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April 24th, 2007 at 09:00am
uppdatering Very Happy
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Motor Baby
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April 24th, 2007 at 09:53am
gillar den skarpt Clap
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In The Murder Scene
the used.
Age: 34
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Posts: 22515
April 24th, 2007 at 10:06am
Aww, vad ni är snälla! Very Happy Och just for det, så ska ni få en uppdatering.

Chapter 2:

The promising words of Gerard didn’t calm Eliza, but she hid her doubt. There was no way she could reveal her uncertainty, she had to disguise it.
“Can we give ourselves one more chance? Can we give this love one more chance?”

Eliza knew she’d had her heart broken before and she was not ready to go through with it again. Despite this, she could see it all so clearly.
They were two contrasts now, black and white.
She, the white and pure. He, the black and filthy.
“Could this be worth it?”, Eliza asked herself.

Because it was different now. Before all of this, she was certain that she could manage it, but something’s changed. When the feelings were put aside, what else was left that was worth? A pile of flesh as a remaining of their love that never dies?

Eliza couldn’t answer to any of these questions, which sat their love on a pedestal.
“Why are you acting like this, Eliza? Why are you so insecure? Because there is nothing holding us back, nothing. Take my hand and never be afraid again.”
The comforting words of Gerard just made things harder for her.
He is everything she ever wanted, but that doesn’t make it any easier.
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Problematique
Bleeding on the Floor
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May 18th, 2007 at 03:41pm
uppdatering!
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May 29th, 2007 at 03:17am
OPPDATERING XD
BlackParadeSoldier
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Gender: Female
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February 18th, 2008 at 04:26pm
Uppdateraaaa!!!
Queefy
Thinking Happy Thoughts
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March 14th, 2008 at 02:31pm
Aww! Den är ju grymt bra!
Uppdatera!!!
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