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Suffocated Lies

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anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
anthony green.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325
March 19th, 2008 at 09:27pm
I wrote this song because of how I've grown up, it's basically about being lost and being lied to, and I called it Suffocated Lies, because when you're suffocating, you don't feel like you're there, and when you're not there, I've always described it as being lost, and lies, self explanatory.

It's not exactly the best song. Me and my friend Kourtney are going to put some guitar to it, record it, and put it up on YouTube. As soon as we do that I'll put it up here.

Here's the song:

I don't wanna be
Here anymore
Take me away
Never bring me back.

I'm all alone
There's no one here
To drive me home
But don't come near

They're all around me
But I don't see
The fact that they
Aren't like me

I'm home alone
On a Saturday
Wondering why
I feel such dismay

I don't wanna be
Here anymore
Take me away
From this ugly world

I never want
To turn around
To come back here
And hear you out


I can't close my eyes
Try to pretend
That this is the place
I want to end

It's too late
To turn back now
I don't remember
My way out

It's like a nightmare
You can't wake up
It feels so real
Because you're going corrupt

They're all in false paradise
While I'm stuck here dying
And they're sick and tired
Of all the lying

I don't wanna be
Here anymore
Take me away
From this ugly world

I never want
To turn around
To come back here
And hear you out

Sick of these
Suffocated lies
I keep on going
Until I'm out of tries

Sick of these
Suffocated lies
I keep on going
Until I'm out of tries

Suffocated lies...
sherlock!
Crash Queen
sherlock!
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 30830
March 24th, 2008 at 12:16am
Hey, it's good. I hope I get to hear it someday.

Endorsement - Someone read my songs in the Poetry section...? Much appreciated.

As said before, it's really great. Once you have a recording, let me hear it, okay? Awaiting that. x]
hate me for me
Killjoy
hate me for me
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 74
April 13th, 2008 at 07:39pm
Wow that's pretty good i write songs myself your right it is right it is quite long but keep working at them you obviously have a good imagination
xoxo