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listen to your heart
In The Murder Scene
listen to your heart
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 20127
June 14th, 2008 at 04:06am
THANK YOU

I was crying inside the room,
you came in and wipe my tears,
you said that you love me then we both hugs,
you said that you're sorry so you do care.

But that wasn't enough,
it has never been,
no!,i think that was just an act.

(chorus)
So thank you for the lies,
thank you for the show,
thank you for the movie 'i do care'
but i dont need your fucking sympathy,
i can live on my own without you.

I was looking sullen all day,
you came to me and asked "what's wrong,baby?"
i gave you faith,i told you all my dirty secrets,
i thought you're the only one that always gonna be there for me.

But that wasn't enough,
it has never been,
no!,i think that was just an act.

(repeat chorus)

Cant you see that i need you?,
dont you feel guilty for what you've done?,
have you realized that you're killing me?,
do know that you're messing up my life?,
you showed me the true meaning of family,
you showed me the true meaning of friends.

(repeat chorus)

just so you know that I'll be keeping this inside,
till the end......
Cherokee
Banned
Cherokee
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300
June 14th, 2008 at 04:08am

This was really good. But you need to add more emotions to it.
i don't exactly write songs, but I think that you should try some of MyChem emotions in it.

Other than that, I think it would sound really good as a song.
listen to your heart
In The Murder Scene
listen to your heart
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 20127
June 14th, 2008 at 05:02am
yeah,i know what you mean.i do have some songs like that.but it's not in english,my love.btw,thanks for being pushy,baha!and for the comment too.my sweet sweet cherokee!

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I.wish.i.wer.a.ghost
Motor Baby
I.wish.i.wer.a.ghost
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 940
June 16th, 2008 at 03:30am
*claps

yay, yuo posted it

and i told you it was good! =]
listen to your heart
In The Murder Scene
listen to your heart
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 20127
June 16th, 2008 at 03:33am
and i know you just want ice-cream. : D
DROP DEAD!
Bleeding on the Floor
DROP DEAD!
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1563
June 22nd, 2008 at 05:13am
wow soo good ur incredible!!!
Heart Attack.
Salute You in Your Grave
Heart Attack.
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 2274
June 24th, 2008 at 09:24am
That was good. I wish I could hear how the song sounds!
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Pansy Wayero
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 372
June 24th, 2008 at 11:37am
i like it. reminded me a bit of my chem songs. but i agree with cherokee you need to put more my chem emotions in it. i like the idea though.i'm glad you posted it on here
tragic regrets.
Bleeding on the Floor
tragic regrets.
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Posts: 1322
June 25th, 2008 at 12:51am
i think this is great.
your emotions are fine, putting 'more my chem' emotions wouldn't make it yours. i like this the way it is (:
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Asiah Scott
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 194
June 25th, 2008 at 02:28pm
wow! I really like it. Although Cherokee is right but the song is expressive in itself.
Keep writing songs...=D
Gerard Way.
In the Cannibal Glow
Gerard Way.
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 53288
July 4th, 2008 at 09:01am
This song has My Chem vibe in it and the chorus reminds me of 'Venom' and the ending has a 'To The End' feel as well. I love how you incorporate both songs feel in this. a job well done. :]
Exposure.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Exposure.
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 450
September 6th, 2008 at 08:31pm
OMG! this song deserved to be bumed over and over again!
so...

BUMPEH!