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listen to your heart In The Murder Scene Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 20127	June 14th, 2008 at 04:06am THANK YOU I was crying inside the room, you came in and wipe my tears, you said that you love me then we both hugs, you said that you're sorry so you do care. But that wasn't enough, it has never been, no!,i think that was just an act. (chorus) So thank you for the lies, thank you for the show, thank you for the movie 'i do care' but i dont need your fucking sympathy, i can live on my own without you. I was looking sullen all day, you came to me and asked "what's wrong,baby?" i gave you faith,i told you all my dirty secrets, i thought you're the only one that always gonna be there for me. But that wasn't enough, it has never been, no!,i think that was just an act. (repeat chorus) Cant you see that i need you?, dont you feel guilty for what you've done?, have you realized that you're killing me?, do know that you're messing up my life?, you showed me the true meaning of family, you showed me the true meaning of friends. (repeat chorus) just so you know that I'll be keeping this inside, till the end......
Cherokee Banned Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 2300	June 14th, 2008 at 04:08am This was really good. But you need to add more emotions to it. i don't exactly write songs, but I think that you should try some of MyChem emotions in it. Other than that, I think it would sound really good as a song.
listen to your heart In The Murder Scene Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 20127	June 14th, 2008 at 05:02am yeah,i know what you mean.i do have some songs like that.but it's not in english,my love.btw,thanks for being pushy,baha!and for the comment too.my sweet sweet cherokee! _____________
I.wish.i.wer.a.ghost Motor Baby Age: 26 Gender: Female Posts: 940	June 16th, 2008 at 03:30am *claps yay, yuo posted it and i told you it was good! =]
listen to your heart In The Murder Scene Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 20127	June 16th, 2008 at 03:33am and i know you just want ice-cream. : D
DROP DEAD! Bleeding on the Floor Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1563	June 22nd, 2008 at 05:13am wow soo good ur incredible!!!
Heart Attack. Salute You in Your Grave Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 2274	June 24th, 2008 at 09:24am That was good. I wish I could hear how the song sounds!
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 372	June 24th, 2008 at 11:37am i like it. reminded me a bit of my chem songs. but i agree with cherokee you need to put more my chem emotions in it. i like the idea though.i'm glad you posted it on here
tragic regrets. Bleeding on the Floor Age: 26 Gender: Female Posts: 1322	June 25th, 2008 at 12:51am i think this is great. your emotions are fine, putting 'more my chem' emotions wouldn't make it yours. i like this the way it is (:
Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 27 Gender: Female Posts: 194	June 25th, 2008 at 02:28pm wow! I really like it. Although Cherokee is right but the song is expressive in itself. Keep writing songs...=D
Gerard Way. In the Cannibal Glow Age: - Gender: - Posts: 53288	July 4th, 2008 at 09:01am This song has My Chem vibe in it and the chorus reminds me of 'Venom' and the ending has a 'To The End' feel as well. I love how you incorporate both songs feel in this. a job well done. :]
Exposure. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 450	September 6th, 2008 at 08:31pm OMG! this song deserved to be bumed over and over again! so... BUMPEH!

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