I Don't Love You ( a Gerard and Eliza love story )

Vel, jeg skrev en historie på engelsktentamen og tenkte at jeg skulle poste den her på INO, siden den hadde et My Chemical Romance preg.
Det kommer flere kapitler, bare jeg får noen lesere som faktisk liker historien. : )
Here it comes, og husk; ikke slakt meg fullstendig, dette er min første historie på INO. xD

...................................................................................I Don't Love You

Chapter 1:

“One day, Gerard Arthur Way, I will love you the way I used to.”, Eliza said, turning her back against him.
The sentence made Gerard’s veins freeze. He couldn’t believe that Eliza had said that without even moving a muscle.
And after all the time she owed, she’s still the good-for-nothing he doesn’t
know.

He tried to remember the good days when they lied next to each other, just looking into each other’s eyes. Hoping, dreaming, that one day they would be together and everything would be the same as it once was.
But it was too late, too much trouble had occurred. She didn’t love him like she did yesterday and there was no turning back now.

After all the things they’d put each other through, it was time to say good bye.
Finally, the bats would be unleashed from this cave of darkness and wraith.
Everything would be fine again, they just had to take the final step and everything would be okay.

“No, Eliza. Please…”, Gerard tried to stop her. He tried to show her just how much she meant, and still means, to him.
“I’m so afraid, Gerard. I’m so afraid of what will come. Of what will happen to us…” Eliza said, holding his cold hand.
“Don’t worry. Everything will be fine, I promise.”
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VAKKERT <3 <3 <3 <3 Fortsett.

Ooh, fancy.
Min første leser. I salute you, Malin. <3

Oi, du er jo kjempe flink!! Den er kjempe bra, mere snart?

Wow, jeg trodde ikke at jeg skulle få slike positive tilbake meldinger.
Kan like gjerne komme med èn oppdatering til.

Chapter 2:

The promising words of Gerard didn’t calm Eliza, but she hid her doubt. There was no way she could reveal her uncertainty, she had to disguise it.
“Can we give ourselves one more chance? Can we give this love one more chance?”

Eliza knew she’d had her heart broken before and she was not ready to go through with it again. Despite this, she could see it all so clearly.
They were two contrasts now, black and white.
She, the white and pure. He, the black and filthy.
“Could this be worth it?”, Eliza asked herself.

Because it was different now. Before all of this, she was certain that she could manage it, but something’s changed. When the feelings were put aside, what else was left that was worth? A pile of flesh as a remaining of their love that never dies?

Eliza couldn’t answer to any of these questions, which sat their love on a pedestal.
“Why are you acting like this, Eliza? Why are you so insecure? Because there is nothing holding us back, nothing. Take my hand and never be afraid again.”
The comforting words of Gerard just made things harder for her.
He is everything she ever wanted, but that doesn’t make it any easier.
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Kjempe bra! Fikk du ikke bra karakter på dette bør læreren din seriøst vurdere om han/hun er ordentelig skrudd sammen *venter på fortsettelsen*

Hvor utrolig bra Liker at du mikser inn sangtekster

Aaww ^^ så sinsykt fint Har du skrivd den helt selv ? Ja.. det har du vel Den var så fantastisk <3

hvorfor er aldri jeg så flink til å skrive tekster? tekstene mine blir så stive!
Kommer det mer?

Har ikke fått noen karakter på historien ennå, venter ennå. ; )

Og, jepp, jepp. Det kommer mer, må bare få skrevet videre på historien.
Er midt oppi de avsluttende tentamenstidene nå, så det er litt hektisk.
Men oppdatering skal det bli. : )
Hvis dere vil, da.

Det er bra!

Chapter 3:

Eliza took a good hard look at how the situation once was and how it is now.
The difference was large and they both knew it.
She just couldn’t find her way home, because it’s in his arms.

“I just want you for my own, more than you could ever know. Is that too much to ask for?”, Gerard asked, interrupting Eliza’s mentality.
“No, not at all”, Eliza answered melancholy. “It’s just that…”
“What, Eliza? Tell me.”, he said with a gloomy face.
“I don’t love you.”
Gerard had heard this from Eliza before, but it wasn’t until now that he realized the pain behind all of it.

He turns away, slowly to hide his feelings that are now slowly showing. A tear comes running down his cheek and the agony reaches its peak.
Eliza stands there like a helpless child ready to weep before she says;
“If I’m so wrong, Gerard, how can you listen all night long?”

“Will it matter?”, he asked, wondering if there really was an answer.
“If you think that I’m wrong, this never meant nothing, to you.”, Eliza answered.
Gerard didn’t know what to say. He thought that she was wrong, because this meant everything to him.
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Å, du skriver så lite i gangen syns jeg! xD
Ikke for å klage såklart, for det du skriver er drit bra

Jeg må holde spenningen oppe, vettu.

FORTSETT
<3

ikke velg å holde igjen spenningen for lenge da!!

Mehe, jeg har lest hele så det såå ^^

aww! ikke stoppe nå! Så flink du er Lina! (oj, det føltes godt å si til en Lina person xD haha )

Har du lest hele elise? :O ååh!

Ja, for lina sendte meg over msn :] Jeg er heldig =)