CuttingxDeep's Poetry...Into your skin.

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CuttingxDeep Killjoy Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 2	July 24th, 2008 at 11:43pm Murderous Love The sky is falling apart, the stars are breaking into tears and heartache. Let them shed into millions of pieces as I adore the sight of the suffering limbs that fall from above. I'll collect them all and keep them as treasures under that velvet box in which I hide your remains. Oh, don't worry, lovely. I'll never replace you for fallen pieces of sky, but I'll give anything to forget you, because these scars are aching and I can't keep on waiting for this memory to break just like the stars. Can I ask for something in return for all these years that I've been enduring? Let me have that missing piece, so I can complete my collection of limbs. And if you won't give me what I so much adore, then I'll take it and break it, so no one can have it no more. We'll watch it fall into pieces, just like the stars from above, and I'll collect those little thorns, so I can replace the missing pieces that you took and broke from my heart.
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347	July 25th, 2008 at 12:00am I really love the poem. Its dark yet beautiful without taking it too far. You seem really good. =] Now, are you making this a single thread or plan to make multiple threads? As this thread says, you have to keep it to one thread. Just wanted to share that so in hope you wont get in trouble. X] And with your low post count, I welcome you to INO. Have fun. =D

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CuttingxDeep
Killjoy

Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 2

July 24th, 2008 at 11:43pm

Murderous Love
The sky is falling apart,
the stars are breaking
into tears and heartache.

Let them shed into millions of pieces
as I adore the sight
of the suffering limbs
that fall from above.

I'll collect them all
and keep them as treasures
under that velvet box
in which I hide your remains.

Oh, don't worry, lovely.
I'll never replace you
for fallen pieces of sky,
but I'll give anything to forget you,
because these scars are aching
and I can't keep on waiting
for this memory to break just like the stars.

Can I ask for something
in return for all these years
that I've been enduring?
Let me have that missing piece,
so I can complete my collection of limbs.

And if you won't give me what I so much adore,
then I'll take it
and break it,
so no one can have it no more.

We'll watch it fall into pieces,
just like the stars from above,
and I'll collect those little thorns,
so I can replace the missing pieces
that you took and broke from my heart.

Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart

Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347

July 25th, 2008 at 12:00am

I really love the poem.
Its dark yet beautiful without taking it too far.
You seem really good. =]

Now, are you making this a single thread or plan to make multiple threads? As this thread says, you have to keep it to one thread. Just wanted to share that so in hope you wont get in trouble. X]

And with your low post count, I welcome you to INO.
Have fun. =D

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