save me from me
Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 67 | December 11th, 2009 at 07:47pm
stary sky's
moon so bright
me and you
you and me
sitting on the boardwalk
holding hands
staring out at
the oceans blue
looking tword the future
not looking back at the past
quietly saying i love you |
MCRmusicmonster
Really Not Okay
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 612 | December 14th, 2009 at 04:45pm pretty cool.  keep up the good work. |
misa misa.
Shotgun Sinner
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 8241 | December 16th, 2009 at 04:42am hey
this was a cute little verse, a lovely sentiment.
You had a few little grammatical errors e.g. moons should be moon's
enjoyable though. |
