loppali
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1600 | April 27th, 2007 at 11:42am
ååh :O Lina! << du må legge ut hele nå *se søtt på* |
the used.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 22515 | April 27th, 2007 at 01:52pm Chapter 4:
“I love you, Eliza. Why can’t that just be enough?”
“Because you never learned a goddamned thing, Gerard. Why can’t you see that?”
“But I have learned. I’ve learned the meaning of true love.”, he said in a hurtful tone.
“You’re just a sad song, with nothing to say.”, Eliza said, not waiting for an answer.
“I have a lot to say, Eliza. Just give me the chance to speak and you’ll see, trust me.”, Gerard said, taking Eliza in his arms.
“This is not the right time or world for us, Gerard. We’re caught in a different place in life.”, she said dismal.
“But will it matter long after I’m gone?”, Gerard asked, while hearing his heart beating faster.
“The hardest part of this is leaving you.”, Eliza said looking straight into his eyes.
“Honesty was always your best quality”, Gerard mumbled dreary.
“I can see you awake anytime in my head.”, Eliza said pretending he’s already gone.
“I want to see you awake anytime I want to.”, he almost shouted.
The sentence made Eliza shiver. She knew that now, that just wasn’t possible.
She felt it in her heart. Though it was aching, she could hear the little voices telling her.
“Eliza… I love you, I really do. As days fade, as nights grow, we will grow old together.
I can feel it, can’t you?”, Gerard said as he was aching.
“I’m numb from all the pain this relationship has caused, Gerard. I just don’t have enough strength to keep it alive.”
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Her Voice Resides.
Demolition Lover
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 17214 | April 29th, 2007 at 03:22pm Å, du er flink! Og dette er en trist historie... |
the used.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 22515 | April 30th, 2007 at 10:48am Skulle ønske jeg hadde flere lesere. 
Oh, well. Kommer med en update snart. : ) |
Jorunn
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4865 | April 30th, 2007 at 02:34pm Kjempebra!! Det er så gøy når det er så mangen "replikker" fra de forskjellige sangtekstene! Gleder meg til fortsettelsen...  |
The Secret Goldfish
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4324 | LINA OPPDATER xD |
the used.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 22515 | Chapter 5:
“But I have, Eliza. I can be strong enough for the both of us.”, he said desperately.
“Oh, Gerard, my love. You don’t understand.”
“Don’t understand what? You need to tell me, honey.”, Gerard asked in despair.
“I don’t love you like I loved you yesterday”, she answered.
Gerard understood everything so clearly now. It was like a light shining his way.
Finally, he understood it all. He hadn't done that before.
The one thing that Gerard never thought of was the the way Eliza spoke her words.
Maybe he just needed to listen more carefully.
So he held her close as they both shook, for the last time...
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the used.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 22515 | Jeg trenger mer tid på meg, det har vært så mye i det siste.
Skole, lekser, mas hjemme og jobbsøknad bare for å nevne noe.
Skal fortsette med skrivingen til neste helg.
Aner fortsatt ikke om jeg skal fortsette med denne historien eller skrive en ny en... :] |
Black Meriah
Really Not Okay
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 675 | Ah, dette er kjempe bra! Heeh, fikk lese alt til nå i en smell! Å jeg digger det. Så sinnsykt bra hvordan du misker sangtekstene inn. Har lyst å lese meeeer  Mn hærregud livet kan bygge seg opp av og til, skjønner det Men ikke vent så alt for lenge da. Dette er sjikkeli rått!  <3 |
takezo kenzei.
Awake and Unafraid
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 12609 | May 17th, 2007 at 04:38pm Åhh Lina du er genial! 8D
Du trekker inn tekster fra sangen på perfekte steder  Fortsett å skriv for du har en ivrig leser her  |
human bean juice
Shotgun Sinner
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 9141 | May 17th, 2007 at 06:17pm Har lest hele tingen nå. Du er flink, det var moro å kjenne igjen setninger^_^ |
Jenny.
Moderator
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 19720 | November 17th, 2008 at 10:35am Okay, so this is a story thread? INO no longer hosts stories, so I am going to lock this; you can use mibba instead.
I won't delete it for now, but if anyone has questions, PM me |
