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a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | And I guess these are the supposed "songs" that I have written. :/ Table Of Contents: Zodiac 11 Minutes To Midnight (Part 1) The Theory Of Romance It's Not Me, It's You Good Morning, Heartache Introduction? Lenore Without A Sound 11 Minutes To Midnight (Part 2) |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Zodiac I saw you walking home last night alone. Did you need some company? Your head reached the floor, Before you could speak a word. You screamed, but no one heard you. There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it, I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare. I may be fucking crazy, But what they don't know cant hurt them. This subtle blade; it cuts too deep to carry on. Don't run, don't run away. Don't mind the pain, It'll be over before you know it, Don't cry, the sorrow's over. There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it, I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare. I may be fucking crazy, But what they don't know cant hurt them. There's blood on my hands, but no one can see it, I'm as innocent as your worst nightmare. I'm may be fucking crazy, But what they don't know cant hurt them. |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | 11 Minutes To Midnight (Part 1) There's no room for mistakes or fighting for, What you believe in, not anymore. Selling your lies, breeding our fear, Taking this bullshit year after year. Oppresion and sorrow is weighing us down, Lying, denying, until we all drown. This warfare and bloodshed no one can see, Please end this chaos, we're falling apart! Even in the darkest night, There's hope, the faintest bit of light, But how long? But how long will it hold? Cast into a conforming mould, Faking my place in the rest of the world, Taking my time till it all ticks away, My righteous self-conscience jumbled up in a haze. These people won't stop till we're all dead, Carnage and blood thirst burned into our heads, If a question arises, if doubt enters mind, They'll crush it, they'll crush it, they'll burn it I say! Even in the darkest night, There's hope, the faintest bit of light, But how long? But how long will it hold? We're spiraling downwards; catastrophe Faster and faster, into this nightmare, But how long? But how long will this hold? Your apathy, it sickens me, All of this warfare in secrecy, Your apathy, it sickens me, All of this bloodshed we can't even see. Even in the darkest night, There's hope, the faintest bit of light, But how long? But how long will it hold? We're spiraling downwards; catastrophe Faster and faster, into this nightmare, But how long? But how long will this hold? |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | The Theory Of Romance I felt so alive For once in my life A darkened world, my only light A taste of surreality Guided through a world unsound The two of us, where we're bound Hurry up and take my hand Trust we'll never fall again Now And could we? Try this one more time you and I? Could be so much more than this I can't help but notice all the world crumbling Beneath my feet so suddenly, Is this what it's like to fly? We fly alone tonight. I walked upon a sea of dreams To dream's to live, to breathe again Is this what it's like to fly? We fly alone tonight. And could we? Try this one more time you and I? Could be so much more than this But tonight, girl, there's so much left to do, A single bow, could break a, ship. And it hurts to know, A single bow could break a ship And it more than feels, A single bow could break a ship And what it seems... And could we? Try this one more time? Can we? And could we? Live again, you and I? To the end? |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | It's Not Me, It's You Who knew misery could follow Our petty crushes? The empty pages couldn't swallow The perfect words we never heard. I couldn't fathom your descent, Rationalize sudden contempt, Did you love the way I fell? A fall best suited for utter regret. I hold it against myself to not see the truth in your eyes. I tried oh so desperately to try, try again. The open wounds you brought Lie in the sorrow I once sought. Wish away and can't we? Hope to die or should we? Who knew sorrow could follow A constant riddle inside her smile? Awkwardly preceeding, Following every thought unheard. Emotion once subscribed, now replaced, (A sudden contempt for myself) A once placid scene, now defaced, A word once beloved, now erased, (A sudden...) A fall best suited for your intent. I hold it against myself to not see the truth in your eyes. I tried oh so desperately to lie, lie again. The open wounds you brought Lie in the sorrow I once sought. Wish away and can't we? Hope to die or should we? The empty silence in my heart Somehow fills with rage, And honey, it's not me, it's you, I brought myself to say. Tear, tear me apart. Tear me in two. Tear apart my heart, along this line, Watch me fall apart, here, as I die. Tear apart my heart, along this line, Watch me fall apart, here, as I die. Fall apart, fall apart. The open wounds you brought, Lie in the sorrow I once sought, Wish away and can't we Hope to die or should we? This choke still holds a grip, A growing urge to slip, Break away but can I Try again or should I? The empty silence in my heart Somehow fills with rage, (Rage) So take this stake, and try like you mean it. Honey, it's not me, it's (fucking) you. |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Good Morning, Heartache You've gone head over heels, At the sight of your own reflection, Payment in irony has you left in the fate of the things you've done. The fire left in your wake Now branded on your face, You really can't make this much worse, but yet, I'd stay and see you try. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. Holding hands with fate, Could it be so dangerous? Fighting the night sky with a flashlight, A certain miss. Take this knife, Make it flesh with the back of your eyes. Take this knife, Make it flesh with the back of your eyes. Is this not, What you wanted right?. Go slow. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. My light. And darling, I'm bleeding. The words you brought the night. And honey, will you take, My only light, despite.. You taught me to live, Now to return the favor. You taught me to live, Now to return your favor. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. Darling, Is this what it's meant to be like, Good morning heartache. And farewell, Good night and goodbye, To the tune of your eyes, Dancing in my light. My light. |
Teach Me To Drown Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 102 Gender: - Posts: 484 | i honestly like ur stuff alot!! glad u took my advice on ur song 'its not me its you' keep it up!!!! and yes the dancing man was required!! |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Introduction They said welcome to the ground, You'll get used to the sound, Of the ones you know, Lost and never found, As the world sinks down, You try pushing up, But there's really no use in trying. Oh, there's really no use in trying. Hello Arsonist, Your friend, Firefighter, Has brought you a lighter, Let's ignite the fire in our hearts, And there's really no one left to say "I told you so", And there's really no one left to say "I told you so". Hello Father, Daddy, are you tired, From always being fired, Same damn routine over again, This gun shown may have represent The world done trying to hold your breath, And there's really no one left to say "I told you so", And there's really no one left to say "I told you so". They said welcome to the ground, You'll get used to the sound, Of the ones you love, Lost and never found, As the world sinks down, You try pushing up, But there's really no use in trying. |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Lenore Lenore, Lenore, Where have you been? The skies have been busy, You've scattered the winds. You've carried my name, In the book that I gave, Your mind's been a prison I reside in my shame. Oh how, oh how? Oh how have you been? It's been, what? ten years? That I've been locked in. I've brought you a message, Please darling read. "Your life is a lie, The lie that you lead." Why, why do you try to find? A way to confide. And, why, why do you live to die? When there's so much more to life? So breathe, darling, Breathe, for I can't do the same Without you here. Time is a state of mind. So let's dance to the 3/4 beat Forever move our feet In our mind, we can be grace. In our mind, we can be grace. Why, why do you try to find? A way to confide. And, why, why do you live to die? When there's so much more to life? Why can't we live for today? When tomorrow's so far away. Why can't we pretend to agree? All you have to do is see... Lenore, Lenore, All so quiet and dear, Oh my, where's your smile? Eyes frozen with fear. We slowly succumb to the beating of drums. Woah. Woah. Woah. Woah. |
Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | ^Those are such amazing lyrics! I read your other song on the song writing competition thread and this blew me away. Seriously great work and you have a very unique style :] |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Aww thank you! I love your work, by the way, it's seriously amazing. |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Without A Sound Cold eyes meet cold pavement, I can't tell you how sorry I am, For letting you off so easily, Here's to your eulogy. I'm tired of these useless summer nights, Hoping an answer will arrive. Arrive. My footing's growing steady, This heart is beating plenty, But at what cost? Now I'm dying in your arms, What will you say? Our life is not a movie, But I'll play it anyway. Just leave the dead dying. I attempt to stop the decay, But there's nothing left to save. As the dripping endless thoughts, Wash away in the rain. The rain. Now I'm dying in your arms What will you say? Our life is not a movie But I'll play it anyway. If words were worthy for an answer, If I could think of what to say, If only my hands could stop shaking, I would take your breath away. Take your breath away. I'm tired of these useless summer nights, Hoping an answer will arrive. |
deeplycullen Killjoy Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 2 | are you really 13? you're, like, totally genius at songwriting. i'll remember your band name so i can say i saw those lyrics first when you become really famous. great job. |
Asiah Scott Joining The Black Parade Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 194 | Without a Sound: Just as awesome as all the others are. I like the upbeat tune to it and I totally agree with "Deeplycullen"..xD And congrats for coming first in the #3 Songwriting competition..XD |
goodbye blue sky Always Born a Crime Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 6461 | "Good morning, heartache" OmG I love the title somuch! The chorus is amazing, if I´d hear this on the radio, I would be like whoah, no matter how bad the singer was, cus the words are wonderful (: Honestly, darling, you can write, do not ever stop! |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked them! ^_^ |
Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | aw thanks and without a sound is brilliant! You always amaze me with your writing skills! If I died in your arms today, What would you say? Our life is not a movie, But I'll play it anyway. ^I love those lines because they're just so beautiful and sad but also just speak out to me in some way. You are truly gifted. :> |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | Awww, thank you. Oh by the way, my band recorded "It's Not Me It's You". We don't have a vocalist, so I guess you have to imagine the lyrics. =) And also, I rewrote Without A Sound, because I wrote a tune to it, and only some of the words fit, while others didn't. |
Kitty Clover Jazz Hands Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 292 | you're welcome and i love the tune for "It's Not Me It's You"! it's really catchy and your lyrics fit in perfectly with the time frame too(i tried singing them to it lol). and i like the new lyrics for without a sound :] |
a day to remember. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 29 Gender: Male Posts: 426 | =D Thank you! Oh by the way, I wrote a new song. Its still in the process of editing, but I'll put it up anyway. |
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