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a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 22nd, 2007 at 08:02pm Tenkte vi kunne ha en historie tråd. Her kan vi anbefale historier, få hjelp når vi har skrivesperre, fortelle om idéer til historier og sånn. Både på norsk og Engelsk Jeg har begynt på en historie på engelsk. Men vet ikke om jeg burde fortsette den :/ Si ifra hvis det er noen skrivefeil/grammatikkfeil Her er begynnelsen: I had nowhere to go, so I just walked. The cigarette loose in my mouth, smoke slowly and softly drifting towards the sky, gone. Gone forever. Just like my future. I had nothing. My school papers were good, but I had no dreams. Without dreams you get nowhere. I think that’s when I made my decision. I was nobody. I was whatserface, nobody and a complete zero. I was no one, compared to a lot of others in this world. So, when the cigarette slowly burnt up, I discovered something huge; I was Konstantine. And Konstantine again was no one. No one at all, no dreams, no talents and few friends. Ambitions? No, I think not. So that’s it. From that day I was Konstantine. Konstantine is no one, I’m Konstantine and I’m no one. Not that complicated, but not that easy either. I lit up another cigarette and kept on walking. BAM! I slammed into someone. Agh, pain. I fell onto the ground, right on my butt. I looked up and saw a girl about my age, on the ground as well. She was rubbing her forehead, and looked at me, confused. “I’m so sorry” I said, and rubbed my head. She smiled widely. “Not a problem at all” She said, got up and held out her hand to help me up. I grabbed it, and got up. She smiled at me and I couldn’t help but smile back. She was short, really skinny and had long black hair down to her waist. Her big green eyes looked straight into my own grey, pierced me. Again she smiled that killing smile. I thought of the song ‘Miss Murder’ and smirked. Her face was round, cheeks that got small, mischievous holes when she smiled. I immediately got very unsecure about my own looks. I’d never been skinny, rather chubby actually. More to love. Haha. My hair was blonde, down to my chest. The only thing I was happy with about myself was my eyes. Intense grey, with a black circle around the iris. She broke the silence. “Hi there, I’m Delilah” She said and shook my hand. “Just like the song! I’m Konstantine” I answered and smiled. “Song?” She asked and wrinkled her eyebrows. “But your name is just like a song too! Konstantine, by Something Corporate, I Love that song!” I narrowed my eyes. “Never heard of that song. But seriously. You haven’t heard ‘Hey there Delilah’?” I asked, and began to sing. “Hey there Delilah, what’s it like in New York City? I’m a thousand miles away, but girl, tonight you look so pretty. Yes you do. Time’s Square can’t shine as bright as you, I swear it’s true!” She answered by singing as well. “I can’t imagine all the people that you know, and the places that you go, when the lights are turned down low. And I don’t understand all the things you’ve seen, but I’m slipping in between, you and your big, dreams, it’s always you, in my big dreams” Her voice was soft, but strong. There was a song named Konstantine? With a ‘k’? That’s just way awesome. “You have a really good voice” I said and grinned. She smiled softly back. “Thank you. So do you. Is Konstantine your real name?” She asked. I shook my head. “I hate my real name. It’s just hideous” I said and shivered as if the thought of it scared the living shit out of me. She laughed. I noticed the way her laugh made me wanna laugh as well. “It really can’t be worse than Katherine!” She said and nudged me in the shoulder. I stared at her. “Your real name is Katherine?” I asked. She nodded as she took a sip of her beer. “Hell yeah. I hate it. Now I’m just known as Delilah, at least the people who matter call me that.” Mental note; call her Delilah. “Well, my name is way worse than that. My name is Leah” I said and shuddered. She laughed. “You call that bad? Katherine is worse, end of story. Hey, want some beer?” She asked before I could argue anymore. I had a mouthful beer, wondering if this was a smart thing to do. All my other friends were smart, always following the rules and never staying out after 10. I had a feeling that life was over for me. I just wanted to rebel. I wanted to make a riot, tell them I’m not the way they think I am. I wanted to make a scene, give them something to talk about. And so I did. A few hours and beers later we were in the middle of the forest. I couldn’t remember how I got there, I couldn’t remember why we went there but there we were, and that was just right. “Know what? You should dye your hair black, you’d be gorgeous!” Delilah slurred. I giggled dumbly. “Maybe I will. I’m so sick and tired of being the teacher’s pet, I wanna be me” I said, and tried not to talk too fast. “Good girl” She said and kissed my cheek. It was like as if time stopped. The kiss seemed to last forever, even though it was only a second or so. I stared at her and she stared at me. I could feel her beer stained breath in my face, and she could probably feel mine. Her gaze was unsteady and kept wandering between my eyes and my lips. Then it happened. She slowly leaned in and carefully pressed her lips against mine. It was like butterfly wings warily against my lips, and it was wonderful. Not one of those hard and quick kisses you give your friends, but one of those ‘I think I really like you’ kisses. Her breath against my face, tender eyes and soft skin.
SlumrendeUllteppe Devil's Got Your Number Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 36571	August 22nd, 2007 at 08:06pm Marit, du er så flink til å skrive
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 22nd, 2007 at 08:07pm Takk for det xD Men nå komme jeg ikke lenger :/ Noen tips om hva som kan skje?
SlumrendeUllteppe Devil's Got Your Number Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 36571	August 22nd, 2007 at 08:10pm Veeeel, det kan jo være en one shot. Eller så kanskje.... fortsetter å kline? xD Ikke spør meg, fantasien min er bare pervers, eller teit og barnslig
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 22nd, 2007 at 08:12pm Haha xD Jeg er nokså pervers jeg også, men klarer ikke å skrive det perverst :/ xD Noe som er like greit kanskje x) Jeg får se på noen filmer og bli inspirert
SlumrendeUllteppe Devil's Got Your Number Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 36571	August 22nd, 2007 at 08:13pm Jeg har ikke prøvd å skrive perverst... untatt i msn samtaler eller no xD Hoho, jeg ville ha lest det perverset du skrev pervers phyco
yep Ghost in the Snow Age: 54 Gender: - Posts: 64734	August 25th, 2007 at 07:05pm Noen som har lyst til å si sin mening om denne? Det er liksom et brev til meg selv... Lekse til mandag...Vi skal visstnok få det tilbake i vår xD Er ikke helt ferdig ennå, men her er i alle fall en begynnelse: Alex's engelske brev til selg selv...: Dear… umm… Myself! How’s it all going? You doing good or what? Well, I surely hope so, since you’re me and all. Well, I guess you’re still busy with your music and movies and all. I believe so. And I bet you’re still going Media and Communication, being the good girl you pretend to be. No dropping out of school, young lady! So, I really forgot what to write on this letter, cause I wasn’t really paying too much attention at the moment we were given this homework. I was mostly in my head, making up new stories or trying to figure out something really random. That’s cause I live a lot in my head. It’s my safe place, where I create my own characters and make them do whatever I may wish. It’s an escape from the world, at least for a couple of minutes. Well, my interests at the moment are, obviously, music and movies. And along with that, stories, reading, sleeping, coffee, hanging out with friends and more music. I don’t really think that’s gonna change… My Chemical Romance is the definite favourite. That’ll probably never change. They’re amazing. They’re my voice of reason in hard times and mean everything to me. Well, at the moment it’s raining like a fucking monsoon outside. I was just thinking about the Hotel Tokio song, Monsoon. I always connect everything with a song, and there’s not a day going by without me shouting “That’s a song!” about something someone said.
yep Ghost in the Snow Age: 54 Gender: - Posts: 64734	August 25th, 2007 at 07:11pm Jævla dobbelpost
SlumrendeUllteppe Devil's Got Your Number Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 36571	August 25th, 2007 at 07:30pm "You doing good or what? Well, I surely hope so, since you’re me and all." Den var bare genial! Jeg synes du skrev kjempe bra Vi skrev også sånn, i fjor. Men vi får det ikke før i 3 klasse eller no xP Kjenner jeg skolen min rett får vi den aldri igjen. Anyways, du er så flink til å skrive
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 25th, 2007 at 07:33pm Jeg synes det var kjempebra! Du er utrolig flink til å skrive! Leser historien din på mibba, og er helt hekta. xD Du går medier og kommunikasjon? Det er det jeg vil gå neste år, men tror ikke jeg kommer inn da...
yep Ghost in the Snow Age: 54 Gender: - Posts: 64734	August 25th, 2007 at 07:53pm Takk! smiles all over the fucking place Jeg går media ja. Det er genialt til nå! Noen litt... "bob, bob lærere, men jeg overlever. :p Bare jobb litt på skola (noe jeg ikke gjorde) og du kommer garantert inn! Hvilke karakterer hadde du i 9.?
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 25th, 2007 at 07:54pm Har ikke fått karakter utskriftene for niende...men i åttende hadde jeg 4,8 i snitt
yep Ghost in the Snow Age: 54 Gender: - Posts: 64734	August 25th, 2007 at 08:17pm 2.8! Det er jo kjempebra! Fortsetter du sånn, er du garantert inn! Hvis du trenger hjelp til noe skolearbeid, er det bare å si ifra! Jeg hjelper deg mer en gjerne! Jeg liker bedre å hjelpe andre med deres skolearbeid enn å gjøre mitt eget xD
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 25th, 2007 at 08:19pm Da fulgte jeg ikke helt med da..men vil så gjerne inn at jeg har bestemt meg for å jobbe ordentlig i år Og det skal jeg huske på, takk for det
yep Ghost in the Snow Age: 54 Gender: - Posts: 64734	August 25th, 2007 at 08:22pm Hadde vært kult om du hadde gått samme linje som meg..
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 25th, 2007 at 08:24pm Ja det hadde jo det ^^, Hvorfor valgte du den linja egentlig? Fordi du er så flink til å skrive eller?
yep Ghost in the Snow Age: 54 Gender: - Posts: 64734	August 25th, 2007 at 08:27pm Jeg er jo veldig glad i musikk og film her jeg elsket siden jeg lærte meg med videospilleren den da jeg var ca. 3, så det var nesten naturlig.. Pluss at jeg elsker musikkvideoer, skriving, bilder og alt det der... Drømmen er å lage musikkvideoer og skrive. Mark Webb er mitt store idol på musikkvideo-greia xD
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 25th, 2007 at 08:29pm Skjønner..jeg elsker å skrive. Helt avhengig av musikk og film! Og musikk video..det er min store drøm, musikkvideo-regissør eller hva det nå enn heter. Mitt idol når det kommer til sånt er Samuel Bayer. Han har regissert de siste Green Day filmene, og jeg er helfrelst GD fan xD
yep Ghost in the Snow Age: 54 Gender: - Posts: 64734	August 25th, 2007 at 08:32pm SB er mitt andre idol! Han er drit god! Vi kan regissere videoer sammen!
a1234 Salute You in Your Grave Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 2242	August 25th, 2007 at 08:34pm Seriøst? Han er et geni! Har du sett 'the making of...' Green Day videoene? Han er så flink! Har hørt om Marc Webb [selvfølgelig] men aldri undersøkt noe om han... Og ja! Det er en kjempeidé! Det hadde vært kjempeartig ^__^

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