Teaching Myself To Live (Teach Me To Drown's Poetry)

Awesome new poems .The last two remind me a lot of the way I felt last month (:

Wow...
Sad Clown Industry was amazing...
i loved it...
Especially the ending...
wonderfully beautiful in a sad, deceptive kinda way...
if you get what i mean...
xxx

thanks you guys so much
it really means a lot

Wow awesomes

Why thank you so much

thanks so much
im trying to write a new one....
but im having a mega writers block

Ventriloquist and Mumbles

The dolls are coming off the shelf
In lines of one and two
Its time that you’ve opened your mouth
To tell them what to do

They only seem to listen
When you mumble under your breath
For when you open your mouth
They die a silent death

I used to be the dying
And I’m the living…now you see?
You will be the doll this time
Sitting upon my knee

I will proudly make you do as I say
And I will stand tall
Your no longer the ventriloquist
And im no longer the doll

I love it
It's kinda like a song

thanks so much!!!

Teach Me To Drown:

Ventriloquist and Mumbles

The dolls are coming off the shelf
In lines of one and two
Its time that you’ve opened your mouth
To tell them what to do

They only seem to listen
When you mumble under your breath
For when you open your mouth
They die a silent death

I used to be the dying
And I’m the living…now you see?
You will be the doll this time
Sitting upon my knee

I will proudly make you do as I say
And I will stand tall
Your no longer the ventriloquist
And im no longer the doll

this is FA SHIZZLE gonna be a song.

i just need a new band =/ why do i have to live in the middle of nowhere?

haha..thanks so much

and i dont know
move i guess lol

dam, your poems are kickass =]
well done on poet of the month btw,
you totally deserve it =]

wow you're an awesome poet. my favorites are Four Walls Four Corners and Cancer, Barbies, Dropping Land Mines, and Now I Know The Difference

thanks so much you guys
it really means a lot

Worst Enemy

I lie there motionless
Staring at the sky
Counting down the minutes
Till the day I die

Why cant it come sooner?
Why do I have to wait?
Inside something horrible
Something that I hate

It hasn’t been a fairytale
And I wish it never could
Cause ive never heard one
But I suppose I should

I wish someone would save myself
From my worst enemy
I see them every day
Inside a mirror they are me

If someone would just help me out
From the hole you dug in my heart
It would make my life much easier
If you hadn’t torn it apart

I want someone there
to pull me away
from they very day
I count down to

Great new poems!I'm reading "Worst Enemy" over and over again...It's just amazing.Great job!

thank you sooooooo much!!!!

super bump^^

thank you for that