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Cherokee
Banned
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300 | June 30th, 2008 at 09:58pm
Oh my God..
I'm speechless.
I love it, well-picked words, btw.
Favourite parts:
A two year desperate tick, tock.
When will the life begin and end?
Where thoughts pull apart.
&
Sun blinding the mirrors reflection.
The past was never real.
OMG it told a life story so easily, love the flow.
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JustAnotherBeaner
Jazz Hands
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 339 | June 30th, 2008 at 10:51pm Yay compilations!!!... if that's how u spell it... but anyway... amazing stuff as always  ... haven't been on here in forever to see it though lol.. keep it coming  |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 1st, 2008 at 10:06pm Thank-you Cherokee and JustAnotherBeaner.  |
Tilly and the Wall
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 1850 | July 4th, 2008 at 10:20am I HAVE NOT BEEN HERE FOR SO LONG : (
But I'm here now 
One thing beneath the mile stones.
That crushed heart without a beat.
Saying good-bye, farewell.
In the May flowers, rain washes away.
Coming to the center of mind.
Sun blinding the mirrors reflection.
^ that is just amazing. It's just so awesome, it blew me away. It should be a song, or a painting or [yeah I'm rambling now : P]...yeah. xD
It's just really beautiful. That part's great, though I do admit I didn't like the rest of the poem as much. Not one of your best, but great all the same, I just loved the way it's so deep and how it made me feel :]
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Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 4th, 2008 at 06:40pm Thanks Jane. Glad you were honest. X]
-note- I might be slow for a while on posting poems, for I have started a story on mibba and hope to finish it this time. XD |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 9th, 2008 at 11:48pm -Read before the poem: “Saving Bella.”-
So, the comment I made above me about writing a story on Mibba kind of died along the lines of not really getting any responses to it. Though, don’t take this into consideration of sympathy to run off and go read it. XD I much rather hold back on it instead now for I have recently come in the possession of the “Twilight” series and can’t seem to put them down. X]
Now, if you know what the “Twilight” series are, then the following poem should make plenty of since. Though, if your not in familiar with the books, I’ll be more than happy to explain the poem upon request. Hope its liked. =] |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 9th, 2008 at 11:49pm Saving Bella.
Going to the moon in a cloud of stars.
A order of set backs over the years.
The flaw - the faint flaw of oblivious life.
A cord reeling his world to hers.
Understatement of luring power.
Confined to the thoughts in her mind.
When the clock reads mid-hour,
And the sun just peeks over the tree tops.
Shining his skin, a marvelous sight.
A lust, a cast for a heart to fall flat.
The gathering of time.
A Romeo and Juliet feel.
For the destiny of immortal life.
A thirst, a craving for crimson blood.
The falls and dangers of evil lurkers.
Unsteady hands and weak knees.
Target for pain and another.
Snarls deep within his chest.
Romeo protecting his Juliet.
Through a promise and a cold heart.
Love for Bella, still flames through. |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | July 11th, 2008 at 01:05am ^That's such a romantic poem and although I haven't read the series, I've heard alot about it and my friends especially love it. I love the way you expressed the story and the end of the poem is so beautiful. You're truly gifted at writing and I have to say this is one of my favorite poems yet. :> |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 12th, 2008 at 10:39pm Thank-you very much Nekotora. =] |
Cherokee
Banned
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300 | July 13th, 2008 at 01:35am
OMG!
A cord reeling his world to hers.
Understatement of luring power.
Confined to the thoughts in her mind.
^^ Favourite part.
Oh huh, I can't even pick a favourite part.. This was the strongest poem I have ever read, it's truely amazing, so is the choice of words! Gosh, I feel jealous, honestly!
This is just so great.
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Pandora's Box
Motor Baby
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 767 | July 13th, 2008 at 12:28pm my faveourite was saving bella.definatly because it was worded execellently
wsa it based on twilight? |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 13th, 2008 at 04:44pm Thank-you Cherokee. Though, I see no reason to be jealous. X]
And thank-you Bella Swan. =]
It is based on Twilight. I've recently gotten the books and decided to write a poem about them. =]
I love your signature, avatar, and username by the way. X] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 13th, 2008 at 08:19pm Gah, I feel bad.
I've been stuck in "lazy ass" mode and just now read all your new works. 
But, I'm glad I did...twas awesome. ^_^
Beautiful and created great imagery.
C'est manifique! xD |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 14th, 2008 at 10:02pm aw, don't feel bad. X]
Thank-you though, Mr. MyChemicalBlack. =] |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 19th, 2008 at 12:02am I haven't wrote a poem in which feels like forever. 
But! I'll be posting one after this post. X]
I'm trying to think of a new title for my poetry page. It seems kind of plan. X]
And I might be changing my theme. I can not make up my mind on that. So, just thought I would share that. XD
Anyways...my new poem isn't all that great, though, I hope you all still like it. X] |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 19th, 2008 at 12:02am Darkness Stains Light.
Neither land nor water reaches true blue.
The writings on walls mean nothing at all.
A kiss and a dash across mountains.
To ponds and cities where birds fly.
Long live the eclipse moon.
The sight seeing reflection of colors.
Circles to glide through.
85% childish photography.
Beaded threads and rope handles.
Yellow sun and violet moon.
To cry would be a shame.
Snap shot freeze frame.
The basket case and sane.
A gas mask to set the place a flame.
To the hearts and halos.
A land mark of clouds proceed.
Yellow sun and violet moon.
Darkness stains light. |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 25th, 2008 at 04:24pm -bump- |
temptation.
Shotgun Sinner
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 8676 | July 26th, 2008 at 12:39pm All of the poems are awesome!!! 
Favourite part from the last one:
Yellow sun and violet moon.
Darkness stains light.
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Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 31st, 2008 at 01:49am Thank-you Pretty Black Sky. =] |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | August 17th, 2008 at 05:45pm Looks Like Rain.
It’s a lovely day for rain.
A shadow in the meadows to peer through.
That flutters to extremes no one can see.
To a invisible man.
An oblivious situation.
Smiles from children.
A following will.
To the tragedy at bay.
The costume of surprise.
Could this be your last time?
Towards the trees within the forest.
Beyond the mountains.
On top, snow!
The flip, flop side looks like rain.
To dance?
Would be a chemical disaster.
Acid to run through the veins.
Burn inside out.
Move beyond immortality.
Could there be someone that awaits?
The monster in dreams to awake.
Devour the soul.
Be no more. |
