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MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | October 5th, 2008 at 02:47pm
*is silent* Holy hell. o_o
By far, this has become my new favorite of yours. ^_^
Need to find another word other than "kickass"...ah, how about wicked?
I'll find a word worthy of what I'm trying to say, but for now-- excellent work, mon amie.  |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | October 7th, 2008 at 05:45pm Thank-you Mr. MyChemicalBlack. 
Made my day. X]
<3 |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | October 11th, 2008 at 02:13am Trick Of The Light.
Day in and day out of the darkness and fade.
To sink in; to be a scene to condemn.
The light through the cracks.
My hope and sanity.
Conviction of the truth. [It hurts.]
Tumbling backwards from existence.
The salvation demanded from me.
A salute and they march along.
Rhythm of feet to close lips.
Ahead is the light.
False meaning yet holds my truth.
A wilting flower to float along the path.
Towards the cracks and vanish from me.
It’s the trick of the light.
Escaping from sight.
Till I’ve become invisible to the militia. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | October 11th, 2008 at 05:35pm The salvation demanded from me.
This line really pops out at you...or to me it did. xD
I still haven't found a word worthy of describing your work, so for now...
I give you the flame of awesomeness *flicks open lighter*
Lmfao.  |
Tilly and the Wall
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 1850 | October 14th, 2008 at 11:57am Blurred Reflection
Oh wow. What a starting, and what an ending. Absolutely stunning!
Trick of the Light
feels like a reminder of a revolution. idk why. But it does inspire some strong feelings. I like that, and the theme's completely new, and that's cool  |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | October 18th, 2008 at 10:49pm Thank-you Mr. MyChemicalBlack, and Ms. Jane. |
knights of cydonia.
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3083 | November 2nd, 2008 at 12:18pm Hey Britt, It's me. (:
So I've been dreading the past few weeks. Been thinking a lot about what I used to do and the people that have always helpled me do that. Could never forget that poetry was that one thing I said I'd never leave.
Anyways, I'm just stunned. Your words always managed to keep me asking for more. Since the beginning when we didn't really know much about this whole writing business 'til the last time I remember, where both of us were thrilled about how far we'd made it.
So I just don't know what to say.
I can't seem to get this smile off my face.
Your poems have always meant so much to me.
And I'm sorry that I can't really find a good meaning to this comment,
I owe you a crit or two. =)
For now, I'll go back to reading those poems that convinced myself to start going back to all of this. Hope I'll get to see you around soon on the boards. 'Cause maybe this is all starting again.
Once more, I keep on asking.
Never stop writing? |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | November 2nd, 2008 at 02:31pm Monica, Monica, Monica, Monica!
I understand, and can't wait / I hope you pick up writing again.
You were, and have always been one of my favorite poets of all time. <3
Loveth you!
<3 |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | November 2nd, 2008 at 02:33pm Twilight.
Deepening the ending of the beautiful face;
The obvious frame of grace and spark.
Saying the breaking words in lavender cords,
Across porcelain skin, marble to the touch.
Golden eyes awake at every moment.
Capturing the world in a re-run of scenes.
Day light to night in hours of out lived timing.
Rules to regard within taking a breath.
A gasp caught in the wind to escape.
For air means nothing for these lungs.
A beat-less heart to love and adore,
A mere being in flaws of years aging.
Sweetened blood; tempting thirst.
Burning veins and crimson eyes.
Unlimited life for love to spare.
Yours and mine…
It remains in the twilight… |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | November 2nd, 2008 at 03:36pm Capturing the world in a re-run of scenes.
Absolutely, j'adore (is that a word? meh, it is now. lol) this line. ^_^
You always write beautifully, mon amie.
Excellent work as usual.  |
Tilly and the Wall
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 1850 | November 7th, 2008 at 12:21pm Ehhhh. I hate everything related to twilight automatically =/
But I liked this poem. It just shows your obvious talent;
Rules to regard within taking a breath.
A gasp caught in the wind to escape.
For air means nothing for these lungs.
=] captivating. |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | November 7th, 2008 at 10:32pm Thank-you Mr. MyChemicalBlack and Ms. Jane.
♥ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | November 8th, 2008 at 09:29pm Ah, and I forgot to give you congrats on winning 'Poet of the Month'.
You deserve it, mon amie. ^_^
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Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | November 10th, 2008 at 08:51pm XD
Thank-you, Mr. MyChemicalBlack.
♥ |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | November 23rd, 2008 at 11:23pm Street Lights.
The horizon fades from sight through distance.
Causing the haze to blind memories.
Left to search for the answer;
The answer of truth in the world.
[Heartless.]
Unknown to be the question.
Along the roads winding down.
Enemies distracting proof.
Street lights guiding home.
Its plain madness to leave nor stay.
Endless wreckage inside to carry.
[My comfort will lie in you…]
Blackout the lights and bring me home.
♥ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | November 24th, 2008 at 06:02pm Don't know why, but I really like the last two lines.
But truly, I enjoyed the whole poem-- it gave me a mysterious vibe.
C'est Manifique, mon amie. |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | November 25th, 2008 at 12:22am Thank-you, Mr. MyChemicalBlack.
♥ |
barcoded.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 551 | November 27th, 2008 at 11:16pm wow |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | November 30th, 2008 at 04:33pm ...Thank-you.
X] |
valiumobsequy
Awake and Unafraid
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 13973 | December 2nd, 2008 at 08:54pm omg!!!! you're sooooo good at writing poetry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I liked Raining Upwards the best |
