Creating A Mind Of My Own.

Escape From Me
Run, as fast as you can.
Escape from me.
Once I have you,
I wont let go.

We'll have good times,
and some bad.
We'll fall in love,
and promise to never leave.

We are eachothers escape,
from the terrible world around us.
But promises will be broken
and problems will arise.
We'll just end up broken,
and back where we started.

So run.
As fast as you can.
Escape from me.

Killer ending, I loved this. xD
It's got a smooth flow, which in turn makes it even better (in my mind at least, haha).

Thank youuu :] <3

Fairy Tale

You see, kids.
This is a story,
about a sad little girl.
And a happy boy,
who saved her.

She felt like a princess.
She finally found her prince.
But she didn't know,
the he was the prince from hell.

He beat her emotions,
he tore her apart.
He screwed up her heart,
so bad that she can't love again.

And he left her,
Alone.
With no one who cared.
She was no longer a princess.
And her prince was gone.

But when he left,
he took something.
Her heart.
And while he lived happily ever after,
she lived terribly after, not able to love ever again.

Now Kids,
do you understand the moral of that story?
Fairy Tale endings aren't happy at all.

Ah, the ending was kickass (a trend I see often with your work, lol), as well as the third stanza.
I must say I do enjoy reading your poems, the flow is unique (at least to me) and you can understand the message quite clearly.
Nice work.

aww, thank youu<3 i think your the only one who reads my poems :]

The Rescue

Beyond the forest,
past the abandoned tree house,
there is a place I like to go.
I call it the rescue.

Theres a flowing creek,
and a bank to sit upon.
The creek has caught my tears,
and the bank has caught me,
when I've fallen.

But soon it won't be,
the wonderful place it is anymore.
All the trees will be cut down,
the creek will dry up.
The creek will no longer be able to catch my tears,
the bank will fall apart,
and no longer be able to catch me.

They can take away the trees,
take away the beautiful trickling water.
They can stomp upon the banks,
and ruin my rescue place.

But no matter how much,
they tear it apart,
I will always remember,
the tears and the smiles,
and the beauty and memories of
The Rescue.

A striking opening that leads into a killer poem.
Great work on this.

Yay, i wasn't sure if anyone (pretty much you) were gonna like it! lol. thank you soo much :]

I thought

I thought,
that i was important.
That i meant at least,
something to you.

I thought,
you were perfect.
and that no one,
and i mean no one could replace you.

I thought,
you were a miracle,
here to save my life.
Here to save my soul.

But those were things,
that i thought,
Not that were true.
Not true at all.

I was never important to you,
and i didn't mean a thing.
You were far from perfect,
someone could replace you.

But most of all,
i thought you were going to save me,
save my life and my soul.
But you really just tore it a apart,
and left me with a big gaping hole.

The last stanza really ties it off nicely.
Well done. ^_^

thanksssss :]

Distortion Of The Mind

Distortion of the mind,
I'm crazy,
I'm insane.
I survive through the pain.

Its the only thing,
that keeps me going.
The ripping of my heart,
the devistation of my soul.

Deep down,
burried in my head,
I'm trapped,
tangled in barbed wire.

Every move that I make is wrong.
The more hurt I have become.
Each sharp edge,
a pool of blood begins.

Lost, too alone to care.
Can't get out,
there is not way out,
Of my distorted mind.

Deep down,
burried in my head,
I'm trapped,
tangled in barbed wire.

Love this stanza, it's VERY relatable.
But honestly, I enjoyed it all...so pardon my rambling. xD
Awesome work.

<3 thanksssssss

Forgiving and Forgetting

Something that lies beneath,
the cold feelings of hate.
A beauty that is hidden,
behind starless eyes.

The long dreamless ngihts,
and the tragic silent screams.
The welling up of tears,
and the knot to the stomach.

Wishing you could stop,
loving the one you hate.
A complicated romance.
that your unable to translate.

Forgiving and forgetting,
are the hardest things to do.
But when it calls for drastic measures,
those are your only choices.

i really like it! keep going please. i lie the first one a lot. please fell free to read mine!
comment make suggestions anything, i'll have more updates soon.

Forgiving and forgetting,
are the hardest things to do.

Absolutely true (at least to me). xD

Another excellent poem, well done! ^_^

wheeeee!!!!! thank yooouuu soo muchh :] <3

Staged

I wake up.
Its not a usual morning.
I step outside my bedroom door,
everything turns to a stage.

I walk out to hear booing.
I trip on myself,
and have fallen down.
Once again, no one helps.

Laughing comes from the crowd.
They're smiling now.
Every single on of them.
Laughing at my mistake.

As i sit there,
alone and hurt,
i attempt to stand.
But when i do something dissapears.

My vision is blurred,
but there it was.
Cold and in peices.
My heart no longer belonged to me.

The stage dissapears,
and a church appears.
I lay down in a comfortable bed,
and close my weary eyes.

And all you hear is the sad sobs,
of the ones im leaving.
Goodbye and remember,
blame them.
Its all their fault.