Creating A Mind Of My Own.

Wooohooo!! Thanks a bunnchh<3

okay. imonly on page two, but the poems on page two are by far the best. im crying now. i really like the uniqueness of your poetry and how simplistic it is. but its simplicity make sit complicated and unknown if you understand what im trying to say. i really like it. i know its good if it makes me cry. It's like you smacked me in the face. Very fantastical:}

i am so glad that you like them. Thank you for the wonderful comment

Dear Heart Breaker

Why do you,
try to make people,
think they're in love?
When they're really not.

You make them think,
that they have your heart,
when really you,
you're just about to rip it back.

You tell them,
"love was never meant for us",
and walk away.
They wished you would turn around,
like yesterday.

Break hearts,
the job that fits you well.
Bring up the hopes,
then knock them all down.

So now they're all thinking,
"what did I do wrong",
when really,
it was your fault all along.

The blame they now carry,
the hurt they now feel,
is so unbearable.
They don't know what is real.

You, killed their love.
They gave it out to you.
But you won't find peace,
no symbolic white dove.

Heart Breaker,
the job that fits you well.
They all will forget you.
While your burning in your own hell.

The first and last stanzas were brilliantly written, not to mention true.
Had a girlfriend like that...*dark thoughts*

Anyways, another awesome poem!
Well done.

thanksss! its actually a song noww. i had a boyfriend like that...lolz. not good memoriess.

Alone

Whats it like,
to not be alone?
To have someone who cares,
and would go to the end of the earth,
for you?

I wish I wasn't alone.
I wish i had someone to hold me.
I wish someone cared about me,
and went to the end of the earth,
for me.

So, i am not completely alone.
I have my guitar.
But can it love me,
care for me,
and go to the end of the earth for me?
No.

You all have the one who loves you.
That special someone.
But i have no one,
its just me and my guitar.
Me, alone with my guitar.

Still alone.
I am always alone.
So i ask of you,
what is it like,
to not be alone?

Your endings are spectacularly chalk full of emotion.
If that makes sense. lmao. xD

Always love to see what new works you post.
Excellent work.

Thank youu. It means alot<3

Awake

A new sun is rising.
My sorrows are falling.
I can finally see the beams of light,
shining through my forgotten grace.

The sound of dripping tears,
the sound that was my lullaby,
can no longer be heard,
in my echoing soul.

A beating sound so faint,
I cannot recall the last time.
The last time i felt,
the soft beating within me.

The idea of you loving me,
has brought all senses alive.
Not only my long lost hopes,
but my dearest dreams.

My body and soul,
awaken from their deep sleep.
Emotions rising and hope holding,
I am finally awake.

Mm, a poem of hope. I like it a lot.
Definately gives the reader a fuzzy feeling. ^_^
Well done.

Thank you<3,Mr.MyChemicalBlack. That was the point i was trying to get across. And Ms.Tear, I'm glad that you loved it, I will take that as a compliment.

Faith is just a whisper away.
Believe in everything they say.
Obviously God has a plan.
But does he really understand?

Im not like everyone else,
and my faith becomes weak.
Some can sense his presence,
but i cannot find him.

I ask for his help,
and i find disatster.
One more chance,
i attempt to give.

I pray for help and hope he sees,
that i need this change.
But no one ever said he would listen.
No one ever said things would be better.

Is there really someone up there,
way up in the sky?
Waiting for my tears to pass,
and the senseless pain to rise?

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sort of a strange one. Sorry if it offends anyone.

C'est Manifique...not to mention tought provoking.
Well done. ^_^

thankyouuu<3

Sorry I haven't posted anything in a little bit. I'm working on one called Shadows of the Night. Hopefully, it will be posted soon. :]

Addicted2GerardWay:

Now I Can Live

She hides her pain
her bouqet of tears
under one big smile
but nobody knows how
shes tempted to reach
for the scissors or a knife
and abruptly end her life

Nobody cares how much
they push her around at school
how much they make her feel like
taking to many pills
she can't believe in god anymore
because he would never let this happen

So today will be the last day
she will hide her tears
She'll let go of her tears
and her urge to live.
Someone will eventually find her
Dead and alone on the bathroom floor.

Someone will read the message
in blood on the mirror
"Now I can live"

Cool. Is this based upon "Cemetary Drive"? Must be.

Actually, it was life based. But now that you mention it, it sounds like thats where i got the inspirationn.

Shadows Of The Night

I've done some terrible things to myself.
I've torn every part of me.
I almost stopped my heart.
I was going to take that one last pill.
I know that I'm still living.

My head,
is telling me I'm dead.
But I know,
deep down inside,
I'm alive.
I'm just sleeping for a while,
in the shadows of the night.

I've picked my heart up,
off the cold dark dusty ground,
covered in glass,
all because of my past.
I sewed myself together,
so many times,
causing a permanent scar.
I know that I'm still living.

My head,
is telling me I'm dead.
But I know,
deep down inside,
I'm alive.
I'm just sleeping for a while,
in the shadows of the night.

I need to release myself from this hate.
These thoughts need to get out of my head.
I'm screaming I'm alive.
I am alive.
Right?

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song/poem..sounds werid. but oooohhh well. I tried.