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Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | September 13th, 2008 at 03:14pm
oh my. you amazed me again.no. you Dazzled me in that one!! LOL :] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 13th, 2008 at 07:22pm Thank you, I'm gald you liked it.  |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | September 14th, 2008 at 08:44pm Lighthouse - This is..[trying not to use "amazing". XD] astonishing. Ha! XD
Thesaurus = Friend. X]
"My body’s crumbling, gone
But at least you’ll see dawn."
Love the ending. =]
And I love your avatar. =D
X] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 14th, 2008 at 09:10pm Yes! I've never had an "astonishing" before! Lmao. xD
Thank you, mon amie. Glad you like it. 
Mm, thanks. Went a little red crazy. 
lol. ^_^ |
temptation.
Shotgun Sinner
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 8676 | September 17th, 2008 at 09:10am Wow...I wasn't here for a while and missed so many things,including your new poems..they're amazing.As Britt said,astonishing. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 19th, 2008 at 09:16am Thank you, My Lady of Sorrows, I'm glad you like it. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 19th, 2008 at 06:56pm We Made Heaven Bow
Oh who shot the bullets into a wall?
Looks like a smiley who forgot to call
Oh, I’m just a guy who wears black
Doesn’t matter, you still attack,
Heaven help us, is this what we do?
Oh writing poems about me and you
Relying on music, oh it scares!
Hope someone hears us—or even cares!
Medic-aid and medication
Don’t you stay on that vacation!
Straps are down—don’t you cry
If you’re lucky, you’ll DIE,
A sad day indeed
Our hearts must feed
Carving NAMES! Hope to fall
Pray the building’s not too tall,
‘Cause the sky should bow
And let us allow
Oh the angelic wings—Rip Them Off!
Welcome to life—you’re not worth a cough! |
Little Miss Mental
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1883 | September 19th, 2008 at 08:28pm my god...you are so absolutley talented...and I hope to GAWd you realize that. You really have something going here, with your rhyming, and the emotions portrayed...don't give up writing, always continue and holy hell...these are fantastic  ♥Rhiannon |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 19th, 2008 at 11:37pm Ah, thank you. 
I'm glad you like it. ^_^
Haha, I won't stop writing, you can be sure of that. xD |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | September 20th, 2008 at 12:11am We Made Heaven Bow - First off, I love the title. =]
I tried to pick a favorite part, though I can't. X]
It all flowed so well.
I just love it. <3
It seems it could be a song.
I pictured it that way as I read. X]
I'll stop now..XD |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 20th, 2008 at 02:14pm Haha, that's alright. 
I'm glad you liked it, I've been trying some new stuff.
I'll post a rough of a song I'm working on later.
*hugs* ^_^ |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | September 21st, 2008 at 04:49pm That was amazing. You amaze me every time! I think by far, your poems are the best.When I see that you posted a new one, I click as fast as I can to get there! lol. My, you are wonderful at writing poetry!  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 21st, 2008 at 06:26pm Ah, thank you. ^_^
I'm glad you enjoyed it.  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 21st, 2008 at 06:28pm Lazarus Fires
She waves the razor
All around
We watch the mirror
She falls to the ground
Oh, I’m a lyrical liar
Can anyone hear her? She crossed the line
A furious fire
Oh she’s not fine
Your heart is broken
Did she die?
But my ego’s stokin’
Did he cry?
The cost to save one
Just three little words
To say at the gun
Pray the car swerves
Yeah, we’re all liars
We know
Into the fires
We go!
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**This is the rough of a song I'm working on, so let me know what you think. ^_^ |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | September 21st, 2008 at 07:55pm Lazarus Fires - I love the title. =]
And I like the song. X]
It seems it could be a song screamed.
If that makes since...X]
Its awesome, Mr. MyChemicalBlack.  |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | September 21st, 2008 at 07:57pm Its GREAT!! I l♥ve the titleeee! |
temptation.
Shotgun Sinner
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 8676 | September 22nd, 2008 at 08:56am Again...amazing job.This can be an awesome song. (: |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 25th, 2008 at 08:19am Gracias everyone, I'm glad it was liked.
I'll post the final version later on. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | September 25th, 2008 at 08:19am Porcelain
The smiles are rotting
All tears turning red
The pictures are plotting
Just wishing you dead,
Sitting higher than I
Like humpty, I fall
Tiny pieces go by
The decadent wall,
“Love it now, child”
‘Cause when you’re older
“Life will get wild”
And become colder,
I withered in sun-light
I fell in the rain
No, this can’t be alright
I don’t feel the pain,
We all get tired
And sick in the head
We all conspired
To sleep when we’re dead. |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | September 25th, 2008 at 04:42pm Porcelain -
-“Love it now, child”
‘Cause when you’re older
“Life will get wild”
And become colder,-
This is,...-insert word other than amazing here-
Love it, Mr. MyChemicalBlack. =] |
