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MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 3rd, 2008 at 11:15pm
We Are The Silent
Oh you’re perfect, you’re perfect
In every which way
With no defect, no defect
Enjoy every day,
But your parents, so blind
You’re raging within
It’s my life, it’s my mind
You’re a corrupt sin,
Your pictures, so sunny
We want to be you
Perfect smirk, so funny
You’ll never be blue,
You’re screaming silent
They see what they want
Your thoughts are violent
The soul’s become gaunt,
Her touch cures cancer
His smile heals the blind
Life’s pretty dancer
Is often hard to find,
But you hate them, it’s true!
Why do what you’re told!?
Oh they have not a clue
We’re perfectly cold. |
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 23462 | July 3rd, 2008 at 11:58pm Speechless. The only thing to say, is fan-fuckin'-tastic. =D |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | July 4th, 2008 at 08:32am yet again you write a poem that reachs out to me. as i was readin it i felt like you were sayin exactly what i felt towards my parents. well done yet again. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 4th, 2008 at 04:08pm Thanks, I'm glad the both of you like it. ^_^ |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 4th, 2008 at 06:36pm yeah! Love this one! =D
XD
"But your parents, so blind
You’re raging within
It’s my life, it’s my mind
You’re a corrupt sin,"
This one is amazing. =] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 8th, 2008 at 11:28pm Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ |
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 194 | July 9th, 2008 at 10:25am Another good poem. xD
"You’re screaming silent
They see what they want
Your thoughts are violent
The soul’s become gaunt,"
This was my favourite. I really like the notion behind it and the topic suits very well. xD |
Illuminaudio
Really Not Okay
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 657 | July 9th, 2008 at 01:58pm amazing!!!
and that is a huge understatement  |
Illuminaudio
Really Not Okay
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 657 | July 9th, 2008 at 02:23pm i read lots of your other poems and i love them!!
you are very talented!!!  |
Molko. Killjoy.
Motor Baby
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 814 | July 9th, 2008 at 03:49pm ohmychem...
that is sooooooooooo...
awesome...
and that can't even explain it...
wow...
xxx |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 10th, 2008 at 06:59pm Thanks everyone, it means a lot.  |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | July 10th, 2008 at 07:54pm I absolutely LOVE We Are The Silent! It really stands out and I love the sarcasm. You're a really awesome writer :] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 11th, 2008 at 05:10pm Thank you, Nekotora.
I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 11th, 2008 at 11:07pm Stuck In Repeat
Death’s a rumor, life’s a lie
No one really WANTS to die
So we wash our face, away tears!
Oh they will never know our fears,
Wake in the morning, so much scorn
And wear the mask we’ve always worn
Go to school, it’s all the same
Daily chores, it’s all a game,
Afternoon, we wage war
And they forgot, “What for?”
Slam the door, your mask is a sham
Want to scream, “I don’t give a damn!”
We fall to sleep, a bruised hand
Wake up! They don’t understand!
Peel open eyelids—we’re not fine
Life’s a joke and death’s the punchline. |
Cherokee
Banned
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300 | July 12th, 2008 at 10:56am Stuck In Repeat
Wow! The ending took my breath away, and the start just made me want to read till the end.
I love the idea XD.
Yay, first comment on this poem.
|
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 12th, 2008 at 10:37pm Stuck In Repeat - I agree with Ms. Cherokee.
It got its message across simply.
Love it. =] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 13th, 2008 at 08:21pm Thanks guys, glad you liked it. ^_^ |
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 194 | July 14th, 2008 at 10:59am Stuck In Repeat: I love it. From the beginning to the end, the way it all emerged.Its soo deep and I can totally relate to it. AWesome!!! |
Molko. Killjoy.
Motor Baby
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 814 | July 14th, 2008 at 09:38pm wow...
well done...
absolutely brilliant my friend...
xxx |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 15th, 2008 at 08:36pm Thanks Asiah Scott and MCR is my life... ^_^
I'm glad both of you liked it. |
