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MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | August 24th, 2008 at 01:03am
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
More soon! *scurries off*
Lmao. xD |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | August 28th, 2008 at 01:07pm You are really goood, like amazingly good!! |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | August 29th, 2008 at 07:38pm Thank you, Addicted2GerardWay.
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Why Are You Sad?
It’s a long way down
No ladder to hold you
An unsightly frown
Are you one of a few?
He stares out forlorn
“They’re trying to kill us”
She says not to mourn
“Cause we’ll do what we must”
We ran through the fire
Smoke piercing our skin
No, we’ll never tire
We’ll prove we’re no sin!
A crowd has gathered, but will they come?
Or fall on the bodies who’ve failed?
They’ll be the first of many, for some
Heroes of death, let them be hailed!
What started with many, has come to one
His eyes are bleeding, though he’s not mad
How’d you overcome what others had done?
“I simply knew what made me so sad”. |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | August 29th, 2008 at 11:49pm Why Are You Sad? -
"They’ll be the first of many, for some
Heroes of death, let them be hailed!"
Loved it, and how you ended it. =]
Awesome job as always, Mr. MyChemicalBlack. |
nevergetmealive Joining The Black Parade
Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 226 | August 30th, 2008 at 06:19am wow, to all of them i just sat down and read every single one over and over again, letting myself absorb them and ...just wow |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | August 30th, 2008 at 05:01pm Thanks guys, it means a lot that you both like it. ^_^
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In Memoriam
Another dreamless night
The funny thing is, I’m AWAKE—
Pounding my head on the floor
With salt burning my eyes!
How can it go away?
If I don’t know what’s wrong—
Medication goes but so far
Your heart’s a confession in its own,
You ask me, “Who is your hero?”
I respect all, but tell me—
How can I believe in a savior?
When I can’t believe in myself,
Look away, hide your eyes—don’t tell me
Mocked by everyone, even my friends—
Maybe if I died tonight, they’d miss me
Empty tears for a soul LONG dead,
Peer into a mirror, what can’t you see?
I HATE you! I HATE me! I HATE it all!—
Left you a message in hurried scrawl
That there was no hero after all.
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*Gasp* Free verse? Lmao. xD |
palomat1 Killjoy
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3 | August 30th, 2008 at 11:19pm wow....those are really good;;; |
palomat1 Killjoy
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3 | August 30th, 2008 at 11:20pm wow those are really good;;!!!!!!!!
*thums up*** |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | August 31st, 2008 at 05:10pm Careful…
Tuesday morning, all is right
Another morning, no light
Just kidding, about kidding
Nail my heart, do your bidding,
They say life gets harder
Like a razor starter
Oh remember me!
I’m your memory,
Think the bad thoughts
Take the hard shots
Is this worth fighting for?
Only you HOPE for more,
Look at the future, can you see?
Oh are you bound, or are you free?
Be careful—you make that choice
They really WON’T hear your voice.
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**It's a little odd, so sry for any confusion. Let me know what you guys think. |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | August 31st, 2008 at 08:22pm In Memoriam - I love this one. Tons of emotion.
You get a hug.
XD
Careful… - Love, love, love, love, [I could go on and on], love! This one. =]
It seems it could be a song. -ponders-
A amazing song. -nods-
Awesome job as always Mr. MyChemicalBlack. |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | September 1st, 2008 at 03:02pm in memoriam:
well what can i say? wow i love ot so powerfull and full of emotion. you definitely get a hug.
careful:
bloody brilliant.
i really have to start coming on here more often. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | September 1st, 2008 at 06:06pm Thanks guys, these two in particular were slightly hard to write...for private reasons.
It means a lot. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | September 3rd, 2008 at 02:52pm Sarcastic? Try Pissed.
I am reality’s flaw
That little, unbroken law
To the world I seem weak
Oh so dark, gloomy, and bleak,
The best part is
They think I’m sad
That they will not miss
When I’m “crazy” mad,
Used to think, “just die!”
To curl up and cry
That I hated my soul
That I’d never be whole,
Well, I’m reality’s flaw
What they think is wrong
Oh the face they thought we saw
Was dead all along. |
XmychildishromanceX Killjoy
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 13 | September 4th, 2008 at 02:14am wow. you are a very good poet. really full of emotion and understanding. something about that you right is really unique and i like it lots. congrats mychemicalblack! hehe |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | September 4th, 2008 at 06:09am Sarcastic? Try Pissed. - wow.
Its amazing, though everything you write it amazing. X]
You get another hug.
"The best part is
They think I’m sad
That they will not miss
When I’m “crazy” mad,"
Love that part. =] |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | September 7th, 2008 at 03:25pm Thank you, mon amie. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | September 8th, 2008 at 09:19pm I Bought A Week
Remember when I got
So sick—matter of time
When you had me forgot
Didn’t tell me the crime,
Yeah, it’s all about you
What was I thinking?
All those pictures I drew
Were of you sinking,
We walk the line—so fine
Maybe if we fell down
Breaking necks, don’t whine
Face burned into a frown,
Sucks it got old, cliché
Think to rewind, just hold on
Figure out what to say
Press your luck, hope it’s not gone,
Death, you say? Oh go away
Life stole your fucking job
Come back on a rainy day
When it’s the clouds who sob. |
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347 | September 10th, 2008 at 06:39am I Bought A Week - Its amazing.
I need to come up with a new word.
"Come back on a rainy day
When it’s the clouds who sob."
^ Love the ending. X] |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | September 10th, 2008 at 08:19pm Can you be any more amazing at this!!!!!!???? MOREEEEE!! i love your poemsssssssss |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | September 12th, 2008 at 09:47pm Thanks guys. *hugs*
I appreciate the feedback. xD
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Lighthouse
Stand alone in dark
A futile spark
Is anybody out there?
You can see me if you stare,
Waves crashing all about
Heart beating- “give a shout!”
There’s a light to come home
Be careful where you roam,
Not a day passed by
Thought I heard you cry
Feel the salt eat at me
Breathe at last, you’re still free,
But all good things end
A scar you can’t mend
My body’s crumbling, gone
But at least you’ll see dawn. |