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dead_nobody
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 87 | June 18th, 2008 at 11:50pm
wow.awsomes  |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | June 18th, 2008 at 11:52pm Hi! I fell in love with your poem Hallway of Eyes, and your newest poem Novocain Candy was awesome! :]
My favorite lines were:
Oh we love with our eyes
‘Cause our hearts aren’t feeling
It’s just these lies
Keep you reeling, |
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 23462 | June 19th, 2008 at 07:04am MCB, I've told you before, and I'll say it again:
Your poems are wonderfully written, beautiful, and are simply fantastic.
You can see how you improved on things that didn't even need improvement. Your poems are wonderful, MCB. Keep up the good work. =] |
Viva la Gloria!
Joining The Black Parade
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 191 | June 19th, 2008 at 02:54pm Lee, you're such a beauty. ^^ Keep writing, dear, I am really enjoying your work. Makes me feel...not alone. =) |
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 194 | June 19th, 2008 at 03:44pm ^ Ode to the Lost soul: I like the tenebrous feel there. Its heartfelt and I love the imagery.
^ Hospital Mistake: Indeed, thats true. lol. I hate the atmosphere, the injections. Its all so dead...very truly written. Nice job! xD |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | June 19th, 2008 at 07:51pm Thanks everyone, I'm glad the six pages worth of poetry didn't annihilate anyone.
Lmao. xD
More to come! *dramatic music* 
Oh, don't worry about it, Lolis12007, it didn't harm anything. ^_^ |
Cherokee
Banned
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300 | June 21st, 2008 at 09:14am
Amazing, just amazing...
But honestly, make a content list. I don't know, easier to browes...
Wow, so many poems... and all are excellent... I am not so new her eon INO, but surely missed loads of your poems.... just so great.
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MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | June 21st, 2008 at 05:07pm Thanks, Cherokee. ^_^
I was planning on doing something like that, to make it easier.  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | June 22nd, 2008 at 11:07pm The Wrong Kind Of Friend
Your eyes are spiders
I mistook for stars
You’re just a hider
Who re-stitched his scars,
Just a mocker, you hate
Ripping my throat with eyes
An embarrassing trait
I succumb to your lies,
Yet when you pass by
I feel the knives, the death
Howling, “You still cry!”
Every night, every breath,
I am so hurt, it pains me
And my confusion, it harms
Scratching out my eyes, can’t see
The message etched on my arms. |
Cherokee
Banned
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300 | June 23rd, 2008 at 02:38am
The Wrong Kind Of Friend: I just read this poem, and I have to say that I had to read it till the end. It is so amazing.
My favourite part:
''An embarrassing trait
I succumb to your lies,''
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MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | June 26th, 2008 at 11:46pm Thanks, Cherokee. ^_^
I'm glad you liked it.  |
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 23462 | June 27th, 2008 at 12:33am I love the first two lines in the first stanza. Your talent shines, mi amigo.
Cherokee's right, it is amazing. Well done, mi amigo. =] |
Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 194 | June 27th, 2008 at 02:45am The Wrong Kind of Friend: Loved it. I love the emotion there and it is pretty awesome. I have the same favourite as Cherokee has..xD |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | June 28th, 2008 at 02:42pm Thanks glad you liked it. ^_^
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Mr. Malcontent
I’m eavesdropping for eyes
And gravestone fingers
The tongue’s tasting for lies
His foot print lingers,
Paralyzed by truth, alone
With only pictures of unease
Our words remain dead, like stone
Expectations, kicked to our knees,
The era of teenage fight
Has been killed, stabbed
Turned off like a faulty light
A snitch who blabbed,
Yeah we are pissed, sad
Treated like an insolent whelp
That’s been beaten bad
And silenced, with no hopes for help. |
The Creature
In The Murder Scene
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 23462 | June 28th, 2008 at 08:40pm And gravestone fingers
The tongue’s tasting for lies
That's awesome.
The era of teenage fight
Has been killed, stabbed
Turned off like a faulty light
A snitch who blabbed,
That reminds me of when the teens in America protested, and supported wars. The Hawks and Doves. Very nice.
Well done, mi amigo. =] |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | June 28th, 2008 at 11:39pm The Wrong Kind Of Friend - Its really dark, but great. X]
Ripping my throat with eyes
An embarrassing trait
Mr. Malcontent - It kind of told a story, yet kept to being dark.
Paralyzed by truth, alone
With only pictures of unease
Love them both.  |
Cherokee
Banned
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 2300 | June 29th, 2008 at 03:21am Mr. Malcontent: OMG, the idea is awesome!
And the ending was kick-ass XD.
Fabourite part:
Our words remain dead, like stone
Expectations, kicked to our knees,
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Asiah Scott
Joining The Black Parade
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 194 | June 29th, 2008 at 04:33am Mr. Malcontent: Love it.
This was the favourite:
"And gravestone fingers
The tongue’s tasting for lies
His foot print lingers," |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | June 29th, 2008 at 12:44pm loved MR.Malcontent i couldnt think of my fave part altho i loved the metaphor 'paralyzed by truth,alone' its really dark |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 3rd, 2008 at 10:35pm I'm glad everyone liked it.
It means a lot.
Thank you. |
