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MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	November 27th, 2008 at 11:06pm Thanks everyone, I'm glad it was liked. xD
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	November 27th, 2008 at 11:07pm A Sweet Dream Disease I gave you my hope I gave you my LIFE You gave me a rope And a fucking knife! It is like my legs are broken I’m dragging my putrid soul Tell! Tell me how it was spoken! Whose fault is this!? I’m not whole! I don’t want a HERO I don’t want a SAVIOR I’m a fucking zero! A lawless behavior! Is it me? Or am I alone!? Broke my hand and throat Dead silent on the telephone! Wear that fear wrought coat! I am not mad, just FURIOUS Why does it take so long!? A freak show for the curious! Strain to hear in a song… __________________________________________________________________________ **Sorry for the language, been having a bad month. Hope everyone likes it eitherway.
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440	November 28th, 2008 at 11:34am holy....THAT IS WONDERFUL! loved it. absolutely loved it. LOVE LOVE LOVED IT! ...sorry rambling...LOVE IT! teehee XD
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372	November 28th, 2008 at 01:33pm 'I gave you my hope I gave you my LIFE You gave me a rope And a fucking knife!' wow amazong especially ther first stanza i can see your outrage! well done
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	November 29th, 2008 at 12:26am Thanks guys, it means a whole lot.
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347	November 30th, 2008 at 04:30pm ahh, I'm late. D= A Sweet Dream Disease - "It is like my legs are broken I’m dragging my putrid soul" Love that part. <3 Sorry you're having a bad month. Hope all will be well.
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 5th, 2008 at 08:41pm Ah, no worries. I'm glad you commented anyways. ^_^ I'm happy you enjoyed, mon amie. ...Yeah, I'm hoping too...Thank you. hugs
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 6th, 2008 at 06:48pm In Tempus Virum Fortum Woke up one day In a baby carriage To a lawless voice “We are broken” “And haven’t spoken” What happens to the hero? When the villains win, The streets turn black And we turn violent— “But they won’t hear it” Pull a soul from the crowd Tell him he can prevail Paint him red! The color makes courage! “But he will fail” Shifting colors—Black and gray Walk the streets Demons on fire—go, Fall to sleep— “To fail another day…” ________________________________________________________________________ **In another of my song/poem kicks, pardon the oddity. Hopefully it doesn't confuse. Enjoy! xD Also, the title translates to "Temperary Hero"
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440	December 7th, 2008 at 11:05am Fantastic! I loved it. Love the odity.Lolz.<3
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347	December 8th, 2008 at 06:11am In Tempus Virum Fortum - ah, this is one of my favorites now. =D ' What happens to the hero? When the villains win, The streets turn black And we turn violent— “But they won’t hear it” ' I liked that part the most. X] Amazing job as always, mon ami.
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372	December 9th, 2008 at 01:13pm i like the idea behind this! what happens to the hero? hmmm great question to add in there. well done
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 9th, 2008 at 06:52pm Thanks guys, it means a lot. ^_^ I have another poem, but don't know whether or not to post it...I may, but still hesitant. x_x Ah well, you'll know when you see it. xD
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 9th, 2008 at 09:48pm About A Guy So how about that guy, The one who shot his head? Boy, he went out with a Bang- - An immortal story Oh no, he’s lost his mind, Evidence of that gaping hole That shot gun left behind- - What a nice day to die! Born to leave us A hero’s hero, dirtied up the line Even when he’s dust We still call him “Mine” Mirror, mirror, in that hall Through all the hardship Will he fall? - - In the dark, it’s a lie! But what would he think What would he say? Mind your manners, And get the hell away! ________________________________________________________________________ Alrighty, this is a narrative song poem. I'm trying something different, let me know what you think. And for those who know who I am referring to in this poem, please don't kill me. Thank you.
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347	December 10th, 2008 at 06:21am About A Guy - The title reminds me of TAI... anyways.... "So how about that guy, The one who shot his head? Boy, he went out with a Bang- - An immortal story" I love the beginning. =] Actually...I love the whole thing. X] Its amazing...like always...so...my comments are basically useless to your skills mon ami. X] Oh! And congrats on Poet of the Month! I wanted you to win. <3 X]
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 10th, 2008 at 06:35pm Thank you, mon amie. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ I was afraid someone would notice the reference and be pissed. x_x
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 10th, 2008 at 06:36pm Holiday Hair Jingle bell, jingle bell, jingle bell rock Say, everyone’s head is stuck in a sock! Huffing and puffing, We really want air— Without hat hair! Turn the lights on! Turn the lights on! The Christmas tree is fake Heavy breathing, in the next room Oh Santa’s gonna wake! So have a swell time Along with jail time! As we mush off with a one horse sleigh! Oh jingle bell, jingle bell, jingle bell rock Look, our head’s have come unstuck! _______________________________________________________________________ **It's that time of year again! It's set to the tune of the song "Jingle Bell Rock". Enjoy! Lmfao. xD
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440	December 10th, 2008 at 08:47pm fantastic! lovvveeeed ittt<3
Frank Anthony Iero. Bulletproof Heart Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 28347	December 11th, 2008 at 06:24am Holiday Hair - haha, I love it. X] Best Christmas song ever. XD
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 11th, 2008 at 06:37pm Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed it. I'm totally singing it on X-mas. Lmao. xD
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351	December 11th, 2008 at 06:38pm Typical. She’s so sweet And he’s so not Parents screaming Was my kid shot? The lights flicker And then go out They’re coming in But don’t you shout Bright white flashes He stood, frozen still As bullets fly through— Blood begins to fill As hands tug you home, Oh your eyes see him Down there on the floor— Haloed in crimson But it’s not right He’s not the one Oh bless that fool I held the gun

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