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Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | January 8th, 2009 at 06:02am
Feeling The Fake - hmm,...I think it could be a awesome song. O.o
"Angels can’t hear you now
And demons turn and bow,"
I like that part the most.
Amazing as always, Mr. MyChemicalBlack. X] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 8th, 2009 at 08:48am Thanks guys, it means a lot that you both like it.  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 8th, 2009 at 08:48am Our Afternoon Analogy
Eaten is the founder’s son
Never ending till it’s done
Have you heard a broken song?
They cry all day, all night long,
Even love’s got a hidden tag
Expiring is such a drag
Are you warm my dearest one?
Won’t return until it’s done,
Hey you, in the back row
I bet them, you didn’t know
Smile like an evening fox
Hold your head inside a box,
No, we don’t have a clue
As we fade to the blue
Hope it’s worth the regret
‘Cause we’re bound to forget! |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | January 8th, 2009 at 08:23pm Once again, wonderful poem. I love it<3  |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | January 8th, 2009 at 08:52pm Our Afternoon Analogy -
"Smile like an evening fox
Hold your head inside a box,"
I love that part. :]
And the ending.
Its amazin', mon ami.  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 10th, 2009 at 12:24am Thanks guys. I'm glad it was enjoyed. ^_^ |
TeamEdward
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 125 | January 10th, 2009 at 07:15am Your new poems are undoubtably amazing but "Someone is drifting away" is still my favourite x |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | January 12th, 2009 at 12:49pm ur oldpoems are great but ur new poems seem to hav a certain edge to them. well done. i love afternoon analogy |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 14th, 2009 at 05:23pm Thanks guys, it's good to hear that they're liked. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 14th, 2009 at 05:23pm No Ambulance, Please
I wish I was broken
I wish I just cared
Forgot what was spoken
Just come in and stare
Looking stupid over there
Just hiding inside your hair
What’s it like to not feel?
I see you—you are real
But what you can’t tell
I can see your hell
I can see the wings
I can hear them sing
You kill yourself—emotions stem
But it is always about them
It is their eyes, come find
Rest in peace, to the blind
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**It's a bit different, but not too different, in the area of structure.
Let me know what you guys think. |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | January 14th, 2009 at 07:04pm No Ambulance, Please -
"What’s it like to not feel?
I see you—you are real"
I like that part the most. :]
And the ending. 
Amazing. X] |
Person0001
Always Born a Crime
Age: 43
Gender: Female
Posts: 5099 | January 16th, 2009 at 12:11pm The earlier ones are so sad, Lee - the newer ones are just pretty. <hugs you> |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 17th, 2009 at 04:28pm Thank you both, it means a lot that you like it. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 17th, 2009 at 04:28pm Time To See New People
In her back pocket
She’s sporting a nightmare
Killing control
With a flick of her hair
Stabbing and killing
She laughs it all off
Matters not who you are
You’re not worth a cough
Lying on the pavement
Blood running to be free
She’s still walking
Somewhere away from me
Should have heeded the signs
Fingers pulling to feel
I’m alive, somehow
Is it a dream of real?
In the red and blue lights
I see you laughing at me
This is a stupid way of saying
That we cannot ever be |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | January 17th, 2009 at 05:42pm i cannot begin to explain how amazing this poem is! The way you write your poems is just fantastic! <3  |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | January 19th, 2009 at 06:39pm Time To See New People -
"In her back pocket
She’s sporting a nightmare"
I love that part and the ending.
Its awesome. :] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 20th, 2009 at 06:38pm Thanks to both of you for taking the time to read it. ^_^
It means a lot that you both like the poem. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 20th, 2009 at 06:39pm The Thrill
Think it’d be grand
A smothering hand,
I kill you every night
Without much of a fight
They won’t know
I can’t show,
Stabbing harder every time
Oh the feeling’s so sublime
Avert your eyes
I wear disguise,
Smile by day
Kill night away
Feel nothing
I’m something,
I’ll kill you with a smile—
I’ll see you in awhile. |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | January 21st, 2009 at 06:11am Yay! I get to read a poem of yours on my B-day! =D
-composes self-
The Thrill -
I love the last two stanzas. Though, the whole thing is amazing, like always. X]
♥ |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | January 22nd, 2009 at 08:17pm Love it. i cant think of anything else to say except that...that poem is amazing<3 |
