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MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 28th, 2008 at 12:41am
Someone Is Drifting Away
Hero, hero
Where have you gone?
Your loyal fans sit
Withered, withdrawn
Started out bright
A flaming tempest of sun
But now you’ve faded
Oh Hero, what have you done?
You’re still preaching
But it’s all rehearsed
We sit staring
Minds gone, we are cursed
The banners, signs
Lay, ashamed of his call
Turns out this Hero
“Saved nobody at all” |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | December 28th, 2008 at 01:19am Someone Is Drifting Away - ah, amazing.
hmm...yep. Your poetry leaves me speechless...in which makes this comment useless. X]
Still, I love it. <3 |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | December 28th, 2008 at 07:08pm I really love that one. Wonderful Jobbb<3 |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 1st, 2009 at 12:37am Thanks guys, it means a lot. *hugs* ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 1st, 2009 at 01:44am Silence Loud
They say just “because”
When they are the cause—
And carve out grins
And smell the sins
They set all the rules
When they are the fools—
Follow me, I hate the smell
Follow me, I’d hate to tell
They say they’re like us
When they look like pus—
Memories, run away from me
Memories, to escape from thee
They know when you’ll die
They will kill and cry
Isn’t it easier just to lie,
When all I care about is the “Why?” |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | January 2nd, 2009 at 12:25am First off, amazing new avatar. 
Silence Loud - 
"And carve out grins
And smell the sins"
I liked that part the most...I'm not sure why...
Amazing, mon ami.  |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | January 2nd, 2009 at 05:03pm Wooooah. That one is definately one of my favoriteess. Love it<3 |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 3rd, 2009 at 12:20am Thanks guys, I was trying something new.
So good to know it doesn't suck horribly. lmao. xD
Glad it was liked.  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 4th, 2009 at 12:53am The Grass Is Obscene
Used to find it so
Invigorating and fun,
Never thought of it
‘Til I wished it to be done
You spend the days
Watching the gun,
Promise me, promise them
Wait for the sun
Hey bus driver
I have not a cent,
My journey’s unpaid for
And my will is bent
Your eyes are watching them
Fingers are counting still,
Live to twenty-two?
But we aim towards a kill
We don’t know where
The step ladder goes,
But one thing’s for sure
The sun always snows
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**The title comes from that saying "The grass is greener on the other side".
Something semi-new, lemme know you think. |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | January 4th, 2009 at 05:51pm hmm i love em all. but i definitely like the concept behind the grass is obscene. *clap* *clap* |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | January 4th, 2009 at 06:48pm The Grass Is Obscene -
"Promise me, promise them
Wait for the sun
Hey bus driver
I have not a cent,
My journey’s unpaid for
And my will is bent"
Love it. <3
"The sun always snows"
Love the last line the most. :]
Awesome topic for a poem, using a saying and what not. X]
♥ |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | January 4th, 2009 at 07:34pm Killer endingg! Absolutely fantasticc<3 |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | January 4th, 2009 at 07:35pm ooops, sorry. Double posted by accident  |
TeamEdward
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 125 | January 5th, 2009 at 03:36pm I really like poems mainly for the fact that it's not just a load of words, it emotions and stories which you can really understand and feel
Your amazing - nobody can deny it
X |
K.K.
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 1787 | January 6th, 2009 at 06:46am I'm freakin speechles.. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 6th, 2009 at 04:59pm Thanks guys, I'm glad all of you liked it. ^_^ |
TeamEdward
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 125 | January 7th, 2009 at 03:30pm Someone is drifting away is my favourite ... Well one of them......so far
It is just so.... I dunno
I simply find your poetry ..... Enchanting
Oops I seemed to have used a lot of pauses
Well your poetry obviously makes me speechless as well haha
X |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 7th, 2009 at 06:06pm Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | January 7th, 2009 at 06:06pm Feeling The Fake
Bite your heathen brow
Husband won’t allow,
We’ll all come in the house
Evict the hated spouse
Different in your eyes
Try to sever ties,
‘Cause I don’t know who I am
The emotions broke the dam
Lie awake at night
Turn and twist in fright,
Angels can’t hear you now
And demons turn and bow,
Doctor Jekyll, watch the knife
Try and Hyde this fucking life,
‘Cause they still hate to believe
Just you come and try to leave |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | January 7th, 2009 at 08:21pm "Doctor Jekyll, watch the knife
Try and Hyde this fucking life,"
^^^^I cannot explain how amazing that is! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful work! |
