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Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | December 11th, 2008 at 06:51pm
Woah, i love the words that you used.
Favorite Line: "Down there on the floor-Haloed in crimson"
Absolutely loved it. Fantastic Work  |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | December 11th, 2008 at 08:53pm Typical. - ahhh! =O
Another one to add to my favorites. X]
And the ending. Ahh, I love it. 
X] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 14th, 2008 at 04:52pm Thanks guys, it means a lot that you like 'em.  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 14th, 2008 at 04:52pm Tiny Violin
Oh we forgot
Oh we forgot
The sun was shot
It ain’t so hot
He’s impaled by candy canes
Tongue sliced off by window panes
Mash your face into a wall
Cheryl, would you hold that call?
Lay down
Way down
No sound
Was found
Can’t help thinking, so wrong
The way home is so long
Away from the sun, in a hole
In the darkness, we can control
The sky is bliss-less
His eye is list-less
Was I a mistress?
Or found as kiss-less?
I have no right to judge at all
For in the end, we too must fall
Elevators go up and down
The sin of one without a sound. |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | December 14th, 2008 at 06:47pm Tiny Violin - 
Amazing...kind of funny...O.o
"Mash your face into a wall
Cheryl, would you hold that call?"
Tis why. XD
Dunno if it was meant to be funny though. X]
Still loved it. <3 |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 15th, 2008 at 03:26pm Haha, it's a "interprete as you read" type poem.
Glad you liked it, mon amie.  |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | December 15th, 2008 at 05:42pm My, my. Another fantastic poem! L♥ved itt! |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 17th, 2008 at 08:18pm Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 17th, 2008 at 08:19pm Phake Photo
People in pictures
Are strangers to me
In despair they smile
But that’s all you’ll see
Are they happy?
Or truly quite sad?
Photos are liars,
They cut out the bad
How unreliable
Just one point of view
That’s a nice canyon
But what about you?
Then death comes,
Meniscus fingers drawn
And all we have left—
A photo to cry on |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | December 18th, 2008 at 06:19am Phake Photo - ah, the ending is sad. =[
Still amazing though, mon ami. 
<3 |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | December 18th, 2008 at 05:01pm Woaaah. I think this is my favorite. Absolutely head over heels in love with that one!! |
UglyAsSin
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 283 | December 21st, 2008 at 12:34pm 'meniscus' wonderful use of this word. I think you will long have a career in poetry. I am in awe!
x |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 22nd, 2008 at 11:06pm Thank you everyone, it means a lot that you like it. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 22nd, 2008 at 11:08pm Whispered In A Crowded Room
Today’s like every other day
Woke up, and don’t know what to say
Three tin soldiers, all in a line
Only to find they’re never fine
But can you hear?
In that cave, your mouth
Or is it fear?
When it all goes south
But when you’re angry
And you’re feeling mad
You either rage, or storm
To drown out the bad
We’re eternally forlorn
The focal point of your scorn
But are we sad—mad—glad?
To fill a hole not had
Thirty, seems too long
Why live that length?
Twenty, seems so fine—
Pray for some strength
It’s a hazard
An eternal hell
Demon’s stare back
YOU CAN NEVER TELL.
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**So this is another "take it as you may" poems. The style's a bit tweaked, but overall decent.
Hope everyone likes it either way. xD |
Molko. Killjoy.
Motor Baby
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 814 | December 22nd, 2008 at 11:14pm WOW... 
all i can say, you're an amazing poet, one of the best I've ever been lucky enough to read the work of, seriously...
BRAVO!!!  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 23rd, 2008 at 11:09pm Thank you, i will fly..., I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 23rd, 2008 at 11:09pm It’s Not You, It’s Me
Do you like them for their music?
Or for their fame?
Do you like them for the lyrics?
Or for their name?
Sugar coated and recycled
Drones on and on
No hope of variety—
Suicide drawn,
Do you care for the message?
Or find it lame?
Do you care for innovation?
Or see it same?
Can’t turn on a radio
Without hearing ONE sound
Pull the trigger, I’m bored—
All monotone, confound!
Do you beat your own drum?
Or follow the crowd?
Do you like to conform?
Or SHOUT it out LOUD?
Their thoughts are yours
The actions, those too
Just give it one try
You ought to be YOU. |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | December 23rd, 2008 at 11:32pm wooooooaah. fantasticcc. lalallaalaloveeedd itt! love the last stanzaaa |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | December 23rd, 2008 at 11:58pm Whispered In A Crowded Room - Amazing.
hmm...yep, I'm a leave it at that. X]
It’s Not You, It’s Me - Ah! Very inspirational.
Its awesome. <3 |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | December 24th, 2008 at 01:37pm Thanks, guys. *hugs*
It means a lot. ^_^
Oh and... Happy Holidays! |
