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MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | February 25th, 2009 at 05:22pm
Saving Suffocation
Have you ever held your breath?
Let eyes roll back into head
It feels like controlling death
Save for the fact you’re not dead
Soon you feel a tightened pain
Face turns shades—to hide the lie
Your heart sounds like falling rain
But on the outside—you won’t cry
If there’s family, you are alone
Falling to the floor, just sleep
An EMERGENCY! Screams the phone
But there’s no one here to weep
In the end, you felt some call
Whispering, “You’ve done no crime”
So why, indeed, should you fall?
“My sweet dear, it’s not your time” |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | February 25th, 2009 at 05:24pm I love love love love love this one. I really love the essence of it. Fantastic Job  |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | February 26th, 2009 at 08:20am FANTASTIC! i love it i love it i love it! well done. i can really relate to the poem. |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | February 26th, 2009 at 08:29am MyChemicalBlack:Thanks, dreamin of novocaine, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
The poem's about: a person referring to murder.
My school refused to print any of my other works in the Lit. Mag. so this is a nice jab in their general direction. *coughs*
Lmao. xD
thought it was about murder. very genius how you wrote it so it seemed innocent but it actually isnt. but to be honest i cant see you writing nice poem about rainbows and lollipops so the school will just have to use that poem. did they use it? |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | February 26th, 2009 at 08:59am Thank guys, I'm glad you both liked it. ^_^ |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | March 1st, 2009 at 03:55pm Saving Suffocation - I love it. :]
hmm...I dunno why. But there seems to be a shifting change in your poetry style.
hmm...that might just be me. xD
Its still amazing all the same though. X]
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ItsTheStaticAge!
Jazz Hands
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 352 | March 7th, 2009 at 05:21pm Saving Suffocation
I love it. It made me cry. :'( |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | March 26th, 2009 at 07:39pm Gracias, mon amie.
I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
More to come soon. 
*lurks away* |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | March 27th, 2009 at 05:17pm Ahhh! I missed you. I'm glad you're back, Mr.MyChemicalBlack<3
lol..that rhymesss XD |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | April 10th, 2009 at 11:32pm Ah, glad I was missed. ^_^
Just been unbearably busy. *dies* lmao. xD |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | April 10th, 2009 at 11:34pm Adeline
The mirror does proclaim,
There is no aim to fame—
Just murder, blood, and hell!
Oh Adeline,
Why are you listening—
To the same
Washed out tunes!?
Where is the music?
Where lays the blame!?
To just confuse it
For fucking fame!
Oh Adeline, sweet Adeline
Why are you listening,
With tears glistening?!
I could be cursing
You to be shot,
But throw a catchy tune—
All is forgot!
Adeline, this isn’t love,
My sweet, when push comes to shove
YOUR LIPS CAN’T EVER TELL.
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**Greetings from the dead, lmao. xD
This is another one of my freakish lyrical-poems, I'll have more poetry posted shortly.
Just need to transfer from my notebook to the computer.
*creeps away*  |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | April 12th, 2009 at 02:22pm WOAH. *jumps in the air with joy* This poem is fucking amazing. I love your work to death, misterr<3 |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | April 17th, 2009 at 10:30pm Adeline - This is amazing.
I love it to extremes. X]
*And I just want to note that your poems/lyrics always give me inspiration when I don't know what to draw and/or write. So, thank-you. :] |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | April 19th, 2009 at 03:27pm Thanks guys, I'm glad you both liked it. ^_^
I've never inspired anyone before, gracias, mon amie. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | How To Answer
Friend, oh, friend
No friend of mine,
You whispered slowly
“I’m hard to find”
You didn’t dawdle
You didn’t pause
Simply asking
“What are flaws?”
My eyes are fading
I know not a word
Oh, friend
I should not have heard
“I need someone to say”
What I don’t know
But need to hear
Veins scream and flow
Oh, friend, sweet friend
I asked you to lie
But you grinned, one question:
“Will you help me die?”
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** Sorry for the lack of poems, guys. It's been tight lately. <_<
I'm still here, though. ^_^ |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | How To Answer -
"But need to hear
Veins scream and flow"
I love that part.
And the ending. :]
Amazing as always, Mr. Lee.
And, yay! For still being here! xD
o.o |
mick_st_john
Killjoy
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 16 | hi, i am new, and i just have to say that i really like your poems...they are marvelous...they can inspire someone very easily... |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | Wowww. you always amaze me, you know that? Absolutely amazing.<3
p.s-I thought you were about to dissapear again.  |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | May 10th, 2009 at 07:09pm Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
No worries, I'm never really gone...just absent for erratic stretches in time. xD |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | May 10th, 2009 at 07:10pm The Open Book
My veins are the pencil
That writes my sad tale
My eyes are the keeper
That knows when I fail—
Oh irony wrapped in bliss
Such rage I have begun to feel
Oh where did my reality go to?
Such wounds like these have yet to heal—
My ribs are the binding
That holds a bleak life
My fingers are the murderer
That stabs with a knife—
Oh what a haze I’m in
Such aggravating fog
Oh to be stuck in quick sand!
Such thoughts stream in to clog—
My face can never tell you
That I kill myself to stay
My teeth must be zippered now
That for happiness, I pay. |
