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mick_st_john
Killjoy
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 16 | May 11th, 2009 at 04:27pm
i really like this one somehow i can relate to it |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | May 12th, 2009 at 05:39pm Well well well...What have we here!!? I SAY A MAGNIFICENT POEM! If i could throw you a party for that beautifulness you just displayed in that poem, i woulddd.<3 |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | May 16th, 2009 at 10:30pm The Open Book - "My ribs are the binding
That holds a bleak life
My fingers are the murderer
That stabs with a knife—"
wow. o.o
The whole thing is just...wow. o.o
I love it, Mr. Lee. <3 |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 14th, 2009 at 12:17am Ah, thank you, mon amie.
It means a lot. 
Pardon my absence, it's been...a long four months. x_x |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | July 14th, 2009 at 12:18am Premonition
It happened when
I looked in your eyes,
I saw myself,
Saw all my lies
For a minute
I was but a teen,
Had my life, my dream,
But what does it mean?
Get out, get out
Oh I am your fate,
A broken husk,
Destroyed by hate
I am that hero
Who never caught on,
A misdemeanor,
Who left you gone
Hey, I saw your eyes,
So fresh and full of life,
Don’t let them hurt you
With their wicked knife
So good-bye, walk on,
Never try to be,
Or just look in that mirror—
And you will see. |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | July 20th, 2009 at 01:36pm Well, well, well! LOOK WHO'S BACK! This poem is amazing by the way.(: I missed your poems very very very very much. I hope you stick around for a while before disapearing again. |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | July 23rd, 2009 at 03:40pm wow love it. what a great way to return! look forward to seeing more poems from you |
Deadly Kiss
Killjoy
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 8 | July 24th, 2009 at 10:59pm Wow‼ I really like your poems. All of them. ♥
You're an amazing poet.
Can't wait to read more! ^^ |
Frank Anthony Iero.
Bulletproof Heart
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 28347 | July 29th, 2009 at 12:06am Premonition - "I am that hero
Who never caught on,
A misdemeanor,
Who left you gone"
It has been a long time m'dear, but you came back with a strong impact. : D
I love it.♥ |
stay away;
In a Bullet's Embrace
Age: 29
Gender: -
Posts: 55069 | July 30th, 2009 at 01:46pm these are some really beautiful poems  kudos. |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | August 10th, 2009 at 06:25pm Thank you everyone, it means a lot that you like it. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | August 10th, 2009 at 06:25pm The Teenage Mortician
Are you happy?
Do you quake in fear?
Hate your mother.
Hate your father.
But when you hate,
You’re denying with a shove.
True sadness isn’t him,
Certainly not her.
True sadness is air,
Breathe in, breathe in.
Are you crying yet?
Do you want to forget?
Death.
It’s your mother.
It’s your father,
The teacher in a room;
The best friend in your seat.
Blood tracing into a net.
Pull in, pull in.
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**It's free verse mixed with something new I'm trying.
**Let me know what you guys think. |
Your Ghost.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 440 | August 10th, 2009 at 07:38pm That honestly took my breath away. You surprise me every time. You are an inspiration, at least to me, to hopefully write poems as beautiful as you. Nice one, once again.(: |
Plague Rat
Jazz Hands
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 343 | August 23rd, 2009 at 03:59am Wow you are very good... I really loved Wicked... |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | August 23rd, 2009 at 01:34pm Thank you, glad you liked it. ^_^ |
catlady
Joining The Black Parade
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 220 | August 26th, 2009 at 01:22am Something really weird is going on. Every time you write a poem I find something in my life that is described to a T by it.
That, and a half-inflated balloon from a couple of weeks ago has been following me around my house all night. ...supernatural, maybe?...I would hope but I know I'm too boring for anything to haunt me. Oh well.
Awesome poems as always. I'd like to see you do something more flowy, more with sentences (I think I've said this before, so sorry if I'm repeating stupid stuff) and verbs, but I know your style is curt and staccato, which fits quite perfectly on its own as well. |
Pansy Wayero
Jazz Hands
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 372 | September 15th, 2009 at 10:22am wow. that was awesome!i like how you said that death is all the people you know and trust! so wickedly cool. |
GotNoPulse
Killjoy
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 5 | September 21st, 2009 at 01:39am Story of My Life
Sick of people asking
Why I seem to be masking
Yet they can’t ever know
The reason I’m afraid to show,
How would they understand?
Why speak a word silenced by hand
Call me freak, call me mistake
It’s my fucking life at stake,
All around there are eyes
Trying to kill me with lies
Paranoid? Maybe
But I won’t let that change me,
I’ve lost it all
My life seeming to stall
Only thing left in the end
Decided to stop being my girlfriend,
So say what you want
I’m not here to flaunt
Taking the only ray I require
I’ll dare to walk that fine wire.
So true. Maaaannn you're good. |
GotNoPulse
Killjoy
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 5 | September 21st, 2009 at 01:43am The Teenage Mortician
Are you happy?
Do you quake in fear?
Hate your mother.
Hate your father.
But when you hate,
You’re denying with a shove.
True sadness isn’t him,
Certainly not her.
True sadness is air,
Breathe in, breathe in.
Are you crying yet?
Do you want to forget?
Death.
It’s your mother.
It’s your father,
The teacher in a room;
The best friend in your seat.
Blood tracing into a net.
Pull in, pull in.
I love this one! So dark, so morose, so perfect! |
MyChemicalBlack
Salute You in Your Grave
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2351 | October 30th, 2009 at 11:52am Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it.
I'm sorry I've been absent for a LONG while, but I promise, it's not permanent.
Thanks for being patient. ^_^ |
