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MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 4th, 2010 at 04:22pm
Thanks for taking the time read them, guys.
It means a lot, that all of you liked my work. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 4th, 2010 at 04:31pm Shooting Star
Have you ever seen a shooting star?
Going fast, but never far?
Have you ever wondered where it goes?
Past the desert and to the poles,
Have you ever seen a star cry?
Screaming, "Why do we die?"
If you've ever seen a star dance,
In your heart, you have a chance.
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Fly
If I told you I could fly
I wouldn't ever answer why,
But, I'd tell you how it felt
The sky's embrace as the land nelt,
Wind tugging at your hair
Gentle fingers of care,
Life itself would stop and wonder
While you'd go on without a ponder,
Gliding through the balmy daylight sky
Slicing past the stars that never die,
To truly feel this marvelous gift
Is to know the will of a bird, mighty and swift
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I was surprised to find these wedged under some books in my attic.
That's 7th and 8th grade material right there, lol. xD |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | February 5th, 2010 at 07:28pm My god, that stuff is wonderful! I really like Fly.
wonderful work, m'dear.(: |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 10th, 2010 at 02:34pm Thanks, I got nostalgic. lol. xD
More current poems soon. |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | February 11th, 2010 at 08:31pm xD I thought they were uber-cute.[:
I look forward to these current poems you speak of. =D |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | February 12th, 2010 at 09:08am why darkness dreams is amazing, one of my fave peices of ur works and i loved shooting star and fly excellent work as per usual |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 13th, 2010 at 04:49pm Stranger. - Haha, yeah, that's what I thought when I found them amongst some clutter. I was thinking, "Damn, my style's changed." xD
Pansy Wayero - Thank you! It's good to know that you liked them. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 13th, 2010 at 04:52pm Is A Promise Permanent?
If I whisper a secret,
You must never tell,
Of how I live
In a never-ending hell
It’s not physical,
My family’s just fine,
But oh, how it withers
And kills my mind
You see, I’m wheezing,
Drowning in my head,
I yearn for no heartbeat
To tell me I’m dead
Why do I think this?
Why am I alive?
I burn for a smile
And shun the knife
But I tell you now,
Because the hour’s late,
If I’m gone tomorrow
Don’t be irate
You’re my shoulder,
I don’t think you know,
Rather you see me smile
Than let the tears show
I repeat, repeat in my head,
I imagine you crying
At what I have said
But remember, you said you wouldn’t tell
Of my eternal burning hell,
And just know when I hug you,
I’m crying as well.
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**Came out darker than I intended, but I figured it was necessary. What if someone asked you to keep a secret?
Hope everyone likes it, as much as one can in this situation. |
Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | February 14th, 2010 at 12:54am Okay, so that made me cry. I don't even know why, but there are tears rolling down my cheeks right now. I guess that means that this poem is AMAZING. <3
My god, you freakin' amaze me!
Now that I'm done being a creep;
I want more poems! So write them. pweaseee. -innocent smile-
Oh!, and Happy Valentine's Day! |
Pansy Wayero Jazz Hands
Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 372 | February 15th, 2010 at 01:02pm wow thats amazing. made me sad and astounded at how gd u r at writing. more pleeease! happy valentines day |
riot reality Jazz Hands
Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 295 | February 19th, 2010 at 11:18am To be consumed by ink
And burned by sadness,
Don’t look at the Dream,
Who thinks it’s all madness
I love that part. And I loved everything in Is A Promise Permanent?. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | February 27th, 2010 at 04:24pm Thanks guys, good to know it wasn't too dark.
It means a lot that all of you like it.
I say that a lot, but it's true.
More poems shortly. ^_^ |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | March 15th, 2010 at 04:28pm The Coffin Is Your Head
Look in, look out
Blurry eyes don't see,
But there's a mirror
To infinity
Watch out, watch me
I don't give a damn-- woes!
Oh the headache comes
And it goes!
Breathe out, breathe out
I die like I'm living, it's true
You keep on smiling,
But I'm not you
Help her, help him
Yes, the night is dark,
Yet what are we
But dead in the park?
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**It's another one of those "take it as you may" poems. Hope you like it regardless. |
K.K. Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 1787 | March 17th, 2010 at 06:46am I love your poetry.. Especially Your Choice.. <3 It kinda really identifies with my current problem/s..
I also loved Hopeless Life & High School but actually I think they were all really amazing =] WIsh I could write poetry... :}
You have so much talent... think I'll check your poetry out more often :}
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K.K. Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 1787 | March 17th, 2010 at 07:16am double post sorry.
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Your Ghost. Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 28 Gender: Female Posts: 440 | March 22nd, 2010 at 07:38pm I really love this one. :3 My new favorite of yours.
I look forward to more! =D |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | March 24th, 2010 at 10:38pm Thanks guys, I'm glad you both liked it. ^_^
Always good to get some input.
More shortly. |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | April 9th, 2010 at 11:32pm Reality Reversed
What if the “light”,
Is the lie?
Trying to gloss,
Our tearful cry,
And maybe the dark,
Often seen as bad—
Reflects a truth,
We knew not we had,
It’s weird, I know,
We can’t see in the dark,
But often true light,
Blazes through— a spark,
And in this darkness,
We believe our own mind,
Until the light’s turned on
And makes us blind,
I’m sorry, it’s odd, I know,
But really, I feel, it ought to be said—
That the real truth comes
From inside your head. |
lolis12007 Really Not Okay
Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 655 | April 12th, 2010 at 01:07am As always i love your poetry you just keep getting better and better
I loved Shooting Star and Fly very nice and wonderful.
i also liked the other ones you have posted
but i shouldnt be surprised you are very talented at this haha
*hugs* mon ami |
MyChemicalBlack Salute You in Your Grave
Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2351 | April 24th, 2010 at 12:08am Thank you, lolis12007, it's good to know someone likes it. lol. xD
More soon. |