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Dana Way
Banned
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 18432 |
New song.
SCREAM!!!
(Intro/ Spoken/ No Music)
Do you know what it feels like to be in pain?
Do you know what it feels like to lose someone
You love? You have no idea how I feel! You get
Out of my face right now!
(Verse 1/ Fast guitar)
I heard you came to watch me fall. What
You don’t know is that you’re in for a surprise.
I’m not going to fall. I’m going to stand strong
On my own two feet and there’s nothing you can
Do about it!
(Chorus 1/ Fast guitar)
Scream! Scream! Scream! Scream until your
Heart feels like it’s about to explode. Scream
Until you can’t scream anymore. Scream until
Your voice goes out. All you have to do is scream.
Scream! Scream! Scream!
(Verse 2/ Fast guitar)
I heard you’ve been falling. I want to be there for
That last mile. I will watch you land on your face
And I will laugh when no one helps you out of the
Hole you’ve dug yourself into. I will leave with my
Pride intact.
(Repeat Chorus)
(Bridge/ Spoken)
You have no life! You are just a fucked-up bastard
Who has no regard for life! All you want to do is
Just drown yourself in beer. You have no idea how
I feel! You get the fuck out of my life!!
(Verse 3/ Fast guitar)
I’m walking away from you because you
Don’t remember who I am. All you want
To do is fuck whoever you want and not
Give a shit. You have no idea how you
Make me feel.
(Repeat Chorus 2x/ 2nd time no music)
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mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | ^i like that. it's really angry, but not in like a lame way lol like in a way that it makes me as the person reading it feel the anger for myself. it's not one of those lame "oh i'm so angry you hurt me feel sorry for me". it's more like a revenge song. very aggressive, but in a kinda classy way. I LIKE IT MUCHLY  |
Lounge Fly
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 1061 | I have some of my lyrics on the poetry boards. Have a look there. |
pxieVAMPIREdust
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1136 | made this song for my dearest friend, she fell in love with this crappy guy, and now, she burst into tears, i wrote this to make her realize what happened to her and analyze it....this is actually my first composition...that's y it's kinda weird...LOL
Living in this place alone
With the pieces of my heart scattered on the ground
Shattered tears are falling
I was blinded from your love
The chamber of hope had closed it's door
How could i ask for more?
Without you my heart is bleeding oh...
The thought of goodbye had lead me to nowhere
I am lost without your love
Trying to make you stay...
But so far I can see that I couldn't change that part...
Your presence still lingers in my head
I'm trying to catch my breath
Memories i thought that will last forever
but I was wrong
I hate the way i'm feeling
Without you my heart is bleeding oh...
The thought of goodbye had lead me to nowhere
I am lost without your love
Trying to make you stay...
But so far I can see that I couldn't change that part...
The chamber of hope had closed it's door
How could i...
Without you my heart is bleeding oh...
The thought of goodbye had lead me to nowhere
I am lost without your love
Trying to make you stay...
But so far I can see that I couldn't change that part...
Without you my heart is bleeding |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | ^i like that it doesn't rhyme. it's hard to write good lyrics that don't rhyme that still seem like lyrics but you've pulled it off really well  |
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325 | May 10th, 2008 at 11:33am I wrote this last night, it's called Falling.
It all starts with a name
Laugh, in your face
I don't know what I've done to you
To make you act this way
I don't believe in hanging on
Cause hanging on only makes you fall
Falling deeper, deeper down
I can't find myself at all
Reaching out in front of me,
Hear something but I can't see
All I hear is that laughter
Now I'm falling, falling faster
I've fallen too far down
No hope of an escape
Give up now
But I still hold my head high
In the air is that sound
So farmiliar yet so vague
I understand now
That this is who I am
I reached out in front of me
Now I know how to see
All I could hear was that laughter
I can't fall anymore. |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 10th, 2008 at 07:29pm Ooooo! I like you a lot! You're very talented at writing lyrics! I love how you're always very deep too because I'm also a very deep person. Please write more!
Oh and I just noticed how you're 12 like me! Yay! More in common! |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 10th, 2008 at 10:43pm The lyricists here have talent. |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 10th, 2008 at 10:52pm |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 10th, 2008 at 11:01pm |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 10th, 2008 at 11:19pm |
The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | May 12th, 2008 at 08:50am Kind of a "spur of the moment" one..some tips would be nice
Loser's Circle
Bleached hair and plastic fingernails
Lace wrapped around the lies you tell
Lips of red but a tongue of sting
What goes around comes around
So who knows what tomorrow brings
You don’t walk the line
You create your own
The guilt on your conscience
Should be as heavy as stone
To say you’re sorry will be a miracle
But what do I know
I’m from the loser’s circle
If you want redemption
You would need a miracle
You painted a world behind closed eyes
Where faithful servants would willingly oblige
Wake up and smell the cold, hard truth
Behind closed eyes
You can’t see what you’ve dug yourself into |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 12th, 2008 at 06:19pm ^ Wow that's good! Really good! I love it! It's very figurative (which I love) and it says a lot. Please write more! |
pxieVAMPIREdust
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1136 | May 12th, 2008 at 10:01pm my chEMMAcal romance:^i like that it doesn't rhyme. it's hard to write good lyrics that don't rhyme that still seem like lyrics but you've pulled it off really well
thank u for your nice comment....do u have the verse that u wanted for your chorus already?that chorus is really awesome!it rocks!....keep up the good work...
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The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | May 13th, 2008 at 11:05am Black Presicion:^ Wow that's good! Really good! I love it! It's very figurative (which I love) and it says a lot. Please write more!
thanks |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | May 14th, 2008 at 12:00am aui_adriene:my chEMMAcal romance:^i like that it doesn't rhyme. it's hard to write good lyrics that don't rhyme that still seem like lyrics but you've pulled it off really well
thank u for your nice comment....do u have the verse that u wanted for your chorus already?that chorus is really awesome!it rocks!....keep up the good work...
thanks
nah i don't have the verse yet. i'm kinda suffering from writer's block at the moment. lol. hopefully i'll get over it soon.
oh and i found these lyrics the other day. i wrote them about a year ago for a song called STORY TIME. they're pretty cliched and kinda i dunno, immature maybe, but they were for a kind of poppy punk song so it kinda worked.
this is not my story
it's the story of a girl
this is not my story
it's the story of the world
of teenage heartache
of teenage pain
her whole world's hurting
and who's to blame
this is not my story
it's the story of the world
well this started out his story
now let's be fair
then he broke her heart
and doesn't really care
he caused teenage heartache
teenage pain
her whole world's hurting
and he's to blame
this is just a story
of a boy and a girl
well this might be my story
i was lying from the start
and since this is a true story
well then you know who you are
you caused teenage heartache
you caused me pain
my whole world hurts
and you're the one i blame
thanks for finishing my story
thanks for the end of my world
so let me know what you guys think? thanks heaps |
The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | May 15th, 2008 at 07:05pm I like how it's so real and relevant Good job! |
The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | May 15th, 2008 at 07:05pm I didn't work so hard on this one. I'm not sure what to call it yet so some ideas would be great.
You hold me tight
In the locket around your neck
Safe and sound
The calm before a shipwreck
I wanna push away
I gotta get away
The lies you tell yourself
Drown out what I’m trying to say
If you never saw tonight
Would you break every promise
We ever had in mind
Would you break down and cry
It seems that blood red moon never sets in the sky
What if I say
I don’t want to be with you tonight
You’re afraid to let go
Like a kite in the storm
Afraid to let go
Afraid I won’t come home
Just let me be and realize
If you want me you have to compromise
Right now I’m so sick
Of these four walls inside |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 15th, 2008 at 08:11pm That is amazing lyrics. I'm not kidding. You're have talent as a lyricist. I love it! |
pxieVAMPIREdust
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1136 | May 15th, 2008 at 09:43pm my chEMMAcal romance:aui_adriene:my chEMMAcal romance:^i like that it doesn't rhyme. it's hard to write good lyrics that don't rhyme that still seem like lyrics but you've pulled it off really well
thank u for your nice comment....do u have the verse that u wanted for your chorus already?that chorus is really awesome!it rocks!....keep up the good work...
thanks
nah i don't have the verse yet. i'm kinda suffering from writer's block at the moment. lol. hopefully i'll get over it soon.
oh and i found these lyrics the other day. i wrote them about a year ago for a song called STORY TIME. they're pretty cliched and kinda i dunno, immature maybe, but they were for a kind of poppy punk song so it kinda worked.
this is not my story
it's the story of a girl
this is not my story
it's the story of the world
of teenage heartache
of teenage pain
her whole world's hurting
and who's to blame
this is not my story
it's the story of the world
well this started out his story
now let's be fair
then he broke her heart
and doesn't really care
he caused teenage heartache
teenage pain
her whole world's hurting
and he's to blame
this is just a story
of a boy and a girl
well this might be my story
i was lying from the start
and since this is a true story
well then you know who you are
you caused teenage heartache
you caused me pain
my whole world hurts
and you're the one i blame
thanks for finishing my story
thanks for the end of my world
so let me know what you guys think? thanks heaps
this is really awesome!i like the theme of your lyrics...it really is touching...just awesome! |
