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BlackRoseDying
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 121 | May 16th, 2008 at 08:45am
(verse1)
now you need to say goodbye
pack up your shit and leave
you have killed me
no point in carrying on with you
pointless to turn back
you don't feel anything
you've nowhere to go
you walk alone
(chorus)
saying goodbye to keep from dying
you gasp your last breath
the poison has reached your end
(x2)
(verse 2)
pain you always left me with
i've no future to look forward to
you have no place
so cover you fucking face
you don't feel anything
you have no where to go
you walk alone
(choruse again)
(re-do verse 1)
(end with)
you've run out of chances
it's my time tonight |
The?!Society
Fabulous Killjoy
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 128 | May 16th, 2008 at 10:39am Black Presicion:That is amazing lyrics. I'm not kidding. You're have talent as a lyricist. I love it!
Thanks very much! |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 20th, 2008 at 05:07pm I don't know a title for this because I suck at coming up with good titles. Sorry if it's confusing. *sigh*, I just need to get this out
Upon these blood stained sheets I keep
The body has a hole too deep
Too far, too soon, for you to see
I'm too ashamed to rise and be
Monitor the life restrictions
So far, so close, to my ignition
Strike the flames you fought to tame
Is it all my fault it's not the same?
The only way to try to stay
And die to carry on this way
Without expressing everyday
Is something I can't bare to pay
The damage you've inflicted to
Just made it easier for you
To watch me bury all I do
Oh, shoot me too
Is living it the hardest part
Is faking it trying to hard
Can I really go that far
How am I holding on tonight?
Am I better off this way
When every breath I take
Is another mistake
And when you turn to me
And when you swear to me
It'll all be okay
Better be the last you say
And if you bury me
From my resume
Through the cemetary gates
I'll lie
How can you wonder what's left
When it was all pretend
Like the lies you told all these years
Well I brought them back to you
You'd ask if I was laughing or crying
You couldn't tell that I was dying
It's hard to push that smile button
All night long
Who knew that angel you once knew
Mastered a simper way too soon
We all faltered one last move
And you're favorite song
Was the tune of my death
I tried, I lied, I bled
I can't take all you said
Just one shot to the head
Now we're all dead |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | May 25th, 2008 at 07:57pm ^for a 12 year old you write flipping good lyrics  i like the "smile button" bit. very creative |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | May 28th, 2008 at 07:28pm i can't remember if i've posted this before or not. too lazy to check. pretty sure i haven't. anyhoo i wrote this song for my best friends when we finished high school last year, we were all pretty upset coz alot of them were moving interstate and what not. so if i've posted this before, punch me, if not, here it is:
we've grown apart
we've moved away
but there's still something
i need to say
you're far away
but i'm still here
if there's ever a time
you need me near
chorus
if your world is hurting
and your heart is breaking
turn around i'll be there
when you really need me
coz you're really bleeding
turn around i'll be there
five years from now
we'll lose touch
we tried to talk
wasn't enough
just keep in mind
i'll be around
ready to catch you
if you fall down
repeat chorus
bridge:
if you're hurting
breaking
feeling
needing
if you're bleeding
not breathing
then chorus again and that's the end
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a day to remember.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426 | May 29th, 2008 at 06:12pm I wrote a new song last night...
Who knew misery could follow
Petty crushes and and when she blushes?
Empty pages couldn't swallow
The perfect words never heard.
I couldn't fathom your descent,
And your sudden contempt,
Did you love the way I fell?
A fall best suited for your intent.
The open wounds you brought
Lie in the sorrow I once sought.
Wish away and can't we
Hope to die or should we?
Sincere words harden the blow,
"It's not me, it's you"
All this hatred lingers,
I wanted to come through.
Who knew sorrow could follow
A constant riddle inside her smile?
Untamed melodies and butchered words,
Following every thought unheard.
Emotion once subscribed, now replaced,
(A sudden contempt for myself)
A once placid scene, now defaced,
(A sudden contempt for myself)
A word once beloved, now erased,
(A sudden contempt for myself)
A fall best suited for my regret.
The open wounds you brought
Lie in the sorrow I once sought.
Wish away and can't we
Hope to die or should we?
Sincere words harden the blow,
"It's not me, it's you"
All this hatred lingers,
I wanted to come through.
Wish away and can't we
Hope to die or should we?
The empty silence in my heart
Somehow fills with rage,
And honey, sorry to say,
It's not me, it's you.
The open wounds you brought
Lie in the sorrow I once sought.
Wish away and can't we
Hope to die or should we?
This choke still holds a grip,
A growing urge to slip,
Break away but can I
Try again or should I?
Let me be,
Just walk away,
There's nothing left,
To take from me.
|
anthony green.
In The Murder Scene
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 23325 | May 30th, 2008 at 02:05am cinderella syndrome;
you've got the sickness of perfection
but i know that you're fake
your apathetic smiles
aren't as real as you think
so whore it up for the cameras
but honey you're not fooling anyone.
put down the lipstick
and show your real side.
got the cinderella syndrome
taking it's toll on you
all these cameras blinding you
flash an apathetic smile
what an awesome lie
too bad, so sad
what an awesome lie
it's done, so long.
what a shame
that you became
everything i hated
but that was who you were
had the cinderella syndrome
that took it's toll on you
all those cameras blinded you
you couldn't see yourself. |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | May 31st, 2008 at 02:33pm This is a song i wrote. i would really like some advice, and the title is "Holding Candles".
She says, "Come to me for your answer."
In darkest hour, prayers enhance her.
Wandering in a backwards story
Ends many at the start.
They try to search for glory
But recklessly fall apart.
Pathways lead her off of cliffs,
And broken bridges bring her down.
Falling lifts her up to darkness
And moves her with inviting guitar riffs.
~Chorus~
----------------------------------------------------------------
Honey, move with rhythm,
And you'll fall up, not down.
The world can tear your way,
But her whispers heal your ground.
The wings of darkness fly you
Into angelic phase-
A phase of will in which,
No one willingly obeys.
---------------------------------------------------------------
She strays, until she finds a room.
There's no one but a brideless groom.
He kept a light, faded from secrets
Between him and his lover;
But now, it's out from a blow,
Which came from her mouth's stutter.
He finds the world oblique and knows
His bride has moved on.
He tears his tux, burns it,
And seeks her to tell his song.
(Chorus)
I've heard her voice,
And the twilight has shown me right.
Throw out your candle,
And she will lead you in the night.
(Chorus) |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | May 31st, 2008 at 06:20pm To the Fatality:
That is the best fucking lyrics I have ever read in my life. I'm not kidding. THE best ever. Amazing. Simply amazing. Just...indescribably freakishly amazing. I love you...IN A FRIENDLY WAY...Amazing, seriously. |
a day to remember.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426 | June 1st, 2008 at 09:51am ^Oh, why thank you. =)
I rewrote a lot of it, so it's a bit different now.
(I had to touch up on the rhyming patterns) |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | June 2nd, 2008 at 06:54pm The Fatality.: ^Oh, why thank you. =)
I rewrote a lot of it, so it's a bit different now.
(I had to touch up on the rhyming patterns)
I was looking back at your lyrics and agree. They are very good! You have a lot of talent! :> |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | June 2nd, 2008 at 07:02pm ^I read yours, Nekotora and I think your lyrics are very good also! Geez, everyone writes amazing lyrics in this forum! I'm jealous... |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | June 2nd, 2008 at 07:54pm Black Presicion:^I read yours, Nekotora and I think your lyrics are very good also! Geez, everyone writes amazing lyrics in this forum! I'm jealous...
Wow, thank you! I liked your lyrics too! They're very descriptive and I love the style! Sorry that I can't help you with a title though. |
Black Presicion
Killjoy
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 93 | June 2nd, 2008 at 08:24pm That's okay! It'll probably come to me eventually. |
never coming home.
Bleeding on the Floor
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1526 | June 3rd, 2008 at 11:20am Nekotora: She strays, until she finds a room.
There's no one but a brideless groom.
Best lyrics ever! |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | June 3rd, 2008 at 03:41pm ^Thank you very much! Oh and by the way, I like your ava(Sweeney Todd rocks!) |
a day to remember.
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Posts: 426 | June 3rd, 2008 at 06:00pm Nekotora, your lyrics are fucking amazing. Beautiful artistry. |
Kitty Clover
Jazz Hands
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 292 | June 3rd, 2008 at 08:18pm Thank you very much! This is actually the first time I've shown my lyrics to anybody, so I'm glad you all like them. :>
I've read alot of the lyrics on this board and think they're done very well! They're all so descriptive and amazing! |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | June 3rd, 2008 at 09:08pm The Fatality.: Nekotora, your lyrics are fucking amazing. Beautiful artistry.
i absolutely agree. these lyrics are fucking rad. |
mer von d
Thinking Happy Thoughts
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 582 | June 3rd, 2008 at 09:15pm to the fatality: your lyrics are so fricken intelligent. like really. seriously awesome.
to the daily fail (love the name btw lol): wow. i can't believe you're only twelve. seriously, your lyrics wouldn't be out of place on, like, a paramore album, do you get what i'm trying to say? edit: < ----- that's meant to be a compliment. not sure i worded that too well lol |
